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The real meaning ...8 total reviews
Comment from Earl Corp
You did a nice job with the prompt. Your love of God really shows in your words. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy. Have a blessed Christmas.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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You did a nice job with the prompt. Your love of God really shows in your words. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and stay healthy. Have a blessed Christmas.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much Earl. I appreciate your positive review and good wishes.
Comment from lyenochka
I love that worship song also! And your poem is a lovely sequence of 5-7-5 stanzas which reminds us of Who Christ is and what He did for us. It ends with personalizing the changed life. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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I love that worship song also! And your poem is a lovely sequence of 5-7-5 stanzas which reminds us of Who Christ is and what He did for us. It ends with personalizing the changed life. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your lovely review. So encouraging! Yes, that song is so rich with meaning and praise.
Comment from harmony13
A lovely poem. The author's words are praising, uplifting, and creative.
I love the faint color purple the author used to present these words.
God is the light of world. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is awesome.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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A lovely poem. The author's words are praising, uplifting, and creative.
I love the faint color purple the author used to present these words.
God is the light of world. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork
is awesome.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much Harmony. Your thoughtful review is encouraging, and appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write full of promise and belief and your words are soothing and also full of grace, a fine write for the contest, I wish you luck, a spiritual write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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A faithful write full of promise and belief and your words are soothing and also full of grace, a fine write for the contest, I wish you luck, a spiritual write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much Dolly. I appreciate your review and your good wishes very much.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Very nice poem about God. And the song is one of my favorites too - such majesty and glory. He is deserving of all praise and worship. This is a great entry for the contest and one can feel your emotion in the words. It also has a beautiful piece of artwork!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Very nice poem about God. And the song is one of my favorites too - such majesty and glory. He is deserving of all praise and worship. This is a great entry for the contest and one can feel your emotion in the words. It also has a beautiful piece of artwork!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much Sherry. What a lovely review! Greatly appreciated, as always.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Certainly shows great faith. Almost every line shouts out the message. The one thing that I would suggest is to connect some of the lines. It reads a little choppy.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Certainly shows great faith. Almost every line shouts out the message. The one thing that I would suggest is to connect some of the lines. It reads a little choppy.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you Paul for your thoughtful review. I have had another look, and changed a couple of things, including punctuation, but each stanza is still within the 5-7-5 format. I think it reads more smoothly.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, probably the only one truly deserving of our praise, Jesus the Lord, who, being God, became a servant unto death, for me, and you, indeed for al, mankind. Beautifully written, well done, good job, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Oh yes indeed, probably the only one truly deserving of our praise, Jesus the Lord, who, being God, became a servant unto death, for me, and you, indeed for al, mankind. Beautifully written, well done, good job, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you Roy. I appreciate your thoughtful and encouraging review, as always
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Most welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
In this poem about God, you have given us the real meaning; Prince of Peace, Messiah Jesus came as Saviour and Emmanuel - God with us transforms our whole life; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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In this poem about God, you have given us the real meaning; Prince of Peace, Messiah Jesus came as Saviour and Emmanuel - God with us transforms our whole life; well said, well done; keep writing. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review. I appreciate it.
