Future Citizen!
Revelation Chap, 1326 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
I like your flash fiction and I'm glad you're a Bible thumper! We do need believers to bring the Lord's perspective into the world. You used some of the things happening like the social score in China. But I do believe that the Lord provided the vaccine help us recover faster from the obnoxious virus that somehow has divided our world.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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I like your flash fiction and I'm glad you're a Bible thumper! We do need believers to bring the Lord's perspective into the world. You used some of the things happening like the social score in China. But I do believe that the Lord provided the vaccine help us recover faster from the obnoxious virus that somehow has divided our world.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thanks for reviewing, God bless you, Laura
Comment from Eunice Amero
so you know the Lord? Because anyone left behind after the Lord comes are in a mess. They will never have another chance for salvation again. You had a good story but I don't care what happens in this old world It's empty and it has nothing to offer. I am ready to meet the LOrd. I am waiting for Him. Good work and good luck
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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so you know the Lord? Because anyone left behind after the Lord comes are in a mess. They will never have another chance for salvation again. You had a good story but I don't care what happens in this old world It's empty and it has nothing to offer. I am ready to meet the LOrd. I am waiting for Him. Good work and good luck
Comment Written 31-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2022
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Yes this is a satire to make people think. Did you read the authors notes? Thanks for reviewing.
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I'm sorry l might had missed that. You are more then welcome.
Comment from T B Botts
Wow Laura, where did you come up with the vaccine card? I'm afraid I'd have to pass on the toaster. It might interfere with charging the electric car. I loved this post. Well thought out and frightfully accurate if we continue down this path. I'll never understand why anyone would trust a government that is so inept and corrupt. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Wow Laura, where did you come up with the vaccine card? I'm afraid I'd have to pass on the toaster. It might interfere with charging the electric car. I loved this post. Well thought out and frightfully accurate if we continue down this path. I'll never understand why anyone would trust a government that is so inept and corrupt. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks Tom, I am happy you get it some people just don't understand the message. God Bless you.
Comment from RShipp
'Yippee! I finally got my free toaster.' Wow... I had to stop reading for a while to quill my laughter. The floor I shaking in my house and the dog is looking at me funny.
Best of luck in the Future Flash Fiction contest.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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'Yippee! I finally got my free toaster.' Wow... I had to stop reading for a while to quill my laughter. The floor I shaking in my house and the dog is looking at me funny.
Best of luck in the Future Flash Fiction contest.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thank you for a thoughtful review.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent piece my friend and well written as well as well thought out! One suggestion I would consider changing if the double spaced lines on every line. I would single space evergy line and double space between paragraphs!
Otherwise a winner of a story!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this Christmas;-)
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Excellent piece my friend and well written as well as well thought out! One suggestion I would consider changing if the double spaced lines on every line. I would single space evergy line and double space between paragraphs!
Otherwise a winner of a story!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this Christmas;-)
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Merry Christmas to you.
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Comment from prettybluebirds
I love this satire of yours. I did get the shots but not because they told me to. I have seen vaccines end a lot of major diseases. Smallpox, polio, measles, and several others. I had these vaccines in the fifties and sixties and they didn't kill me, stunt my growth, or give me cancer. I'm 75 and in very good health even after all 3 COVID shots. My sister died of COVID shortly after it came to this country and before the shots. I'm sure she would have loved the chance to live. However, I believe it should be the choice of each individual whether or not to get the shot.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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I love this satire of yours. I did get the shots but not because they told me to. I have seen vaccines end a lot of major diseases. Smallpox, polio, measles, and several others. I had these vaccines in the fifties and sixties and they didn't kill me, stunt my growth, or give me cancer. I'm 75 and in very good health even after all 3 COVID shots. My sister died of COVID shortly after it came to this country and before the shots. I'm sure she would have loved the chance to live. However, I believe it should be the choice of each individual whether or not to get the shot.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks for your review, sorry about your sister. The vaccines such as smallpox obliterates the disease this one does not work and treatments are available if you can get them.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Laura.
This is well conceived and well-written. You have incorporated the mark into technology that exists and even now is being used in Sweden. I hope this wins the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Hello Laura.
This is well conceived and well-written. You have incorporated the mark into technology that exists and even now is being used in Sweden. I hope this wins the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thank so much Robert, some reviewers didn't get the satire and mis interpreted my article, lol Merry Christmas to you and yours.
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There must be a modicum of truth in satire, or it doesn't work. It is pretty clear to me. There is truth in your story. Some don't want to understand.
Comment from WalkerMan
This well thought out satire would be funny if it weren't so likely to come true if the populace fails to realize the danger we face and does not find the courage to resist before it is too late. The scenario you describe is entirely realistic, as as least one country is already offering chips to its citizens.
Though Globalists do not believe the Bible, it is plausible that they are sufficiently aware of the predictions in Revelations to mimic that order of events to add to the fear of Christians who believe such hings will literally occur and already are in progress. Accordingly, anyone who believes Revelation's predictions are accurate ought to resist vigorously, as God respects positive action far more than prayer without other effort. NOW is the moment of choice -- either actively resist Evil or selfishly expect to be saved just because you believe so.
Regarding mass disappearances, the long term harm that more and more jabs will cause will result in unprecedented numbers of deaths, successfully satisfying the Globalists' agenda to remove billions (yes, with a "B") of people from this world within a few years. Their purpose is to cut Earth's population to a more easily controlled number of serfs, who later will further be reduced as fast as artificially intelligent robots can be developed to replace their skills.
Meanwhile the self-appointed "elites" intend to use technology to make themselves immortal by transferring their minds into non-biological android bodies, which can be repaired with spare parts and/or more advanced parts forever after. What the new entities will lack is a soul with the conscience only God can create; hence they effectively will be incapable of compassion and respect for life, making them incurably Evil by God's standards.
In short, the "elites" are making Revelations come true, and THEY ultimately will regret their hubris. Sadly, that is not much consolation for their victims. Again, resistance is the ONLY way to show God which side you really are on.
Thank you for doing YOUR part to awaken others to the reality we face.
Superb, and aptly illustrated.
(I intentionally ignored any punctuation or other flaws in this post, in order not to distract from either your vital message or mine.)
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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This well thought out satire would be funny if it weren't so likely to come true if the populace fails to realize the danger we face and does not find the courage to resist before it is too late. The scenario you describe is entirely realistic, as as least one country is already offering chips to its citizens.
Though Globalists do not believe the Bible, it is plausible that they are sufficiently aware of the predictions in Revelations to mimic that order of events to add to the fear of Christians who believe such hings will literally occur and already are in progress. Accordingly, anyone who believes Revelation's predictions are accurate ought to resist vigorously, as God respects positive action far more than prayer without other effort. NOW is the moment of choice -- either actively resist Evil or selfishly expect to be saved just because you believe so.
Regarding mass disappearances, the long term harm that more and more jabs will cause will result in unprecedented numbers of deaths, successfully satisfying the Globalists' agenda to remove billions (yes, with a "B") of people from this world within a few years. Their purpose is to cut Earth's population to a more easily controlled number of serfs, who later will further be reduced as fast as artificially intelligent robots can be developed to replace their skills.
Meanwhile the self-appointed "elites" intend to use technology to make themselves immortal by transferring their minds into non-biological android bodies, which can be repaired with spare parts and/or more advanced parts forever after. What the new entities will lack is a soul with the conscience only God can create; hence they effectively will be incapable of compassion and respect for life, making them incurably Evil by God's standards.
In short, the "elites" are making Revelations come true, and THEY ultimately will regret their hubris. Sadly, that is not much consolation for their victims. Again, resistance is the ONLY way to show God which side you really are on.
Thank you for doing YOUR part to awaken others to the reality we face.
Superb, and aptly illustrated.
(I intentionally ignored any punctuation or other flaws in this post, in order not to distract from either your vital message or mine.)
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2021
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Thanks for your thoughtful review and comments, I am glad you get it. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
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You are most welcome. This is an important post.
Stay safe and well. -- Mike
Comment from Ritsal
This would be funny if it were not so sad a commentary of present events. I'm afraid for the most part that we're being played. There are many reasons for not wanting a jab, the saddest of these was that aborted embryos were used in creating the vaccine. I hope that was just a rumor, but with Fauci in charge, I find it entirely believable.
Best wishes and Merry Christmas!
Rita
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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This would be funny if it were not so sad a commentary of present events. I'm afraid for the most part that we're being played. There are many reasons for not wanting a jab, the saddest of these was that aborted embryos were used in creating the vaccine. I hope that was just a rumor, but with Fauci in charge, I find it entirely believable.
Best wishes and Merry Christmas!
Rita
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your review and a very Merry Christmas to you and yours.
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You're very
welcome
Comment from LJbutterfly
You say you are a Bible Thumper in real life. But in your story, you would be hiding out. (I would be also) You've entwined Christian beliefs and science in a dystopian world of fear for some, and joy for others, like the main character. What a creative Future Flash offering for the contest. I hope you do well.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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You say you are a Bible Thumper in real life. But in your story, you would be hiding out. (I would be also) You've entwined Christian beliefs and science in a dystopian world of fear for some, and joy for others, like the main character. What a creative Future Flash offering for the contest. I hope you do well.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thank you, my goal is to make people think and read Rev 13, I believe the vaccine passports are a prerequisite to the mark of the beast and that government tyranny is the beginning of the one world order.
