What Doesn't Kill You...
How I spent my last decade40 total reviews
Comment from Terrilou
Wow, what a story! You are one of those wise people who has lived that old adage "what doesn't kill you, makes you stronger" (except Bears LOL).
Good job on telling your story! Although a very serious subject, you approached it with some humor! Nicely done!
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Wow, what a story! You are one of those wise people who has lived that old adage "what doesn't kill you, makes you stronger" (except Bears LOL).
Good job on telling your story! Although a very serious subject, you approached it with some humor! Nicely done!
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Getting old isn't for sissies. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Earl, Wow. A poem of strength and determination.
Your poem reads and flows well, and your couplets have good rhyming within. Of special note:
The doctor was very formal,
He said welcome to your new normal,
(Thanks, Doc, for your great bedside manner
and for being so optimistic and encouraging.)
Also:
Through 54 races I wouldn't quit,
Not even a little bit,
(Hooray, for you)
Earl, the events above were life changing for sure.
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Hello Earl, Wow. A poem of strength and determination.
Your poem reads and flows well, and your couplets have good rhyming within. Of special note:
The doctor was very formal,
He said welcome to your new normal,
(Thanks, Doc, for your great bedside manner
and for being so optimistic and encouraging.)
Also:
Through 54 races I wouldn't quit,
Not even a little bit,
(Hooray, for you)
Earl, the events above were life changing for sure.
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much LateBloomer. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from ESOSTINE
Dear Earl, your piece of poetry made quite an interesting read. It told a story of how you could not allow your circumstances to change you rather you improved yourself with your circumstances through determination and faith. Very inspirational. Well done. Wishing you more fun and a wonderful Christmas. Keep the poems coming.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Dear Earl, your piece of poetry made quite an interesting read. It told a story of how you could not allow your circumstances to change you rather you improved yourself with your circumstances through determination and faith. Very inspirational. Well done. Wishing you more fun and a wonderful Christmas. Keep the poems coming.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for the six stars. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from RShipp
'I never fell into despair's clutches,...' and 'Though I couldn't run, I walked 5k races for fun,..." (My two favorite lines. I am doing the WALKING of 5ks as well. It's a blast.)
Well done and congratualtions.
A great life-changing writing prompt entry.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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'I never fell into despair's clutches,...' and 'Though I couldn't run, I walked 5k races for fun,..." (My two favorite lines. I am doing the WALKING of 5ks as well. It's a blast.)
Well done and congratualtions.
A great life-changing writing prompt entry.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Annmuma
No need to be kind-- your poem is wonderfully done. In the couple of areas where the meter is a little off, it seems to add to meaning of poem -- almost like 'crutch-struggle' as you work toward walking.
I do have one take-away from the poem -- the accident and prognosis did not change you -- you changed them with your faith and your tenacity. I very much enjoyed your work and wish you and everyone you love have a wonderfully blessed Christmas. ann
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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No need to be kind-- your poem is wonderfully done. In the couple of areas where the meter is a little off, it seems to add to meaning of poem -- almost like 'crutch-struggle' as you work toward walking.
I do have one take-away from the poem -- the accident and prognosis did not change you -- you changed them with your faith and your tenacity. I very much enjoyed your work and wish you and everyone you love have a wonderfully blessed Christmas. ann
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for the six stars Ann. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Terry Broxson
An excellent entry for this contest, gets my vote, and good luck. You are certainly a person of determination and accomplishment. It is an inspiration to others. I also love the bear connection. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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An excellent entry for this contest, gets my vote, and good luck. You are certainly a person of determination and accomplishment. It is an inspiration to others. I also love the bear connection. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from TPAC
This write made me strong. I found strong and intense statements throughout its course read, captivating thoughts inspiring to the human spirit. I learnt ones desire could over come obstacles. Very strong conclusion in my given opinion.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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This write made me strong. I found strong and intense statements throughout its course read, captivating thoughts inspiring to the human spirit. I learnt ones desire could over come obstacles. Very strong conclusion in my given opinion.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for the six stars. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from lindafisher
I really enjoyed this as a story. The rhyming isn't perfect but it doesn't matter. You have given us a glimpse of your life and it feels so real. Also love the artwork bringing humour to this uplifting story.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I really enjoyed this as a story. The rhyming isn't perfect but it doesn't matter. You have given us a glimpse of your life and it feels so real. Also love the artwork bringing humour to this uplifting story.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from lyenochka
Good for you! I admire your spirit! And I am really impressed with these two lines:
"I never once thought this isn't fair,
I knew God would answer my prayer,"
So many people go through a lot less of a trial and complain. You overcame and gave us a super example! Thank you!
Hope you do well in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Good for you! I admire your spirit! And I am really impressed with these two lines:
"I never once thought this isn't fair,
I knew God would answer my prayer,"
So many people go through a lot less of a trial and complain. You overcame and gave us a super example! Thank you!
Hope you do well in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, I took second place. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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Why, Earl, I went to your profile and found that you won all kinds of contests! Seems like you're a stealth writer!
Congratulations!
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
From the title of your poem, I was expecting more of a philosophical answer to why what doesn't kill you makes you stronger but on reading the poem, I realised how you had penned a beautiful example. I feel so inspired to know that even such challenging physical ailments didn't stop you from being happy and contented.
Overall, your poem was well thought out.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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From the title of your poem, I was expecting more of a philosophical answer to why what doesn't kill you makes you stronger but on reading the poem, I realised how you had penned a beautiful example. I feel so inspired to know that even such challenging physical ailments didn't stop you from being happy and contented.
Overall, your poem was well thought out.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
