What Doesn't Kill You...
How I spent my last decade40 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
You are a strong person my friend, I'm not sure I could have had the courage you did to face your problems. Some people would just give up, but you showed everyone! Very well told story, best of luck in the contest.:)
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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You are a strong person my friend, I'm not sure I could have had the courage you did to face your problems. Some people would just give up, but you showed everyone! Very well told story, best of luck in the contest.:)
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Malerie
What doesn't kill you makes you stronger indeed. What a powerful story/testimony of trimputh. You didn't allow your condition to define. Your spirit to through your journey is so inspiring. Your story can help so many. I hope you share as often as as possible. Keep running) walking the race, some start but never finish. I'm sure each time you cross the line, it does like first place.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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What doesn't kill you makes you stronger indeed. What a powerful story/testimony of trimputh. You didn't allow your condition to define. Your spirit to through your journey is so inspiring. Your story can help so many. I hope you share as often as as possible. Keep running) walking the race, some start but never finish. I'm sure each time you cross the line, it does like first place.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from JLR
Hey so what if the meter is a bit off and the rhythms may feel forced.... your words I read came from the heart from the very start! Take it from an old fart, poems are like art, and art is seen from the EYES of OUR BEHOLDER and God smiles down on you this day and every day over the past decade so POWER ON, WRITE, Write, Write some more!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Hey so what if the meter is a bit off and the rhythms may feel forced.... your words I read came from the heart from the very start! Take it from an old fart, poems are like art, and art is seen from the EYES of OUR BEHOLDER and God smiles down on you this day and every day over the past decade so POWER ON, WRITE, Write, Write some more!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This was a very inspirational story. It shows that ones positive outlook can overcome many obstacles in life. That is a great picture. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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This was a very inspirational story. It shows that ones positive outlook can overcome many obstacles in life. That is a great picture. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from fayesh
I certainly enjoyed your poem in a rhymed couplet format. There is inspiration here to never give up. Your poem is expresses the strength of the human spirit.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I certainly enjoyed your poem in a rhymed couplet format. There is inspiration here to never give up. Your poem is expresses the strength of the human spirit.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You have overcome a huge health problem here and I am glad you have survived to tell us your tale. A story of great courage here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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You have overcome a huge health problem here and I am glad you have survived to tell us your tale. A story of great courage here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Dolly. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from nomi338
I have news that may raise your hair. Overcoming disability is like climbing a stair. If your faith and determination are strong enough, you are halfway there. With God all things are possible. Even learning to live with a disability that cannot be defeated. May God bless you even more than he already has.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I have news that may raise your hair. Overcoming disability is like climbing a stair. If your faith and determination are strong enough, you are halfway there. With God all things are possible. Even learning to live with a disability that cannot be defeated. May God bless you even more than he already has.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Here's to your determination not to give up.
-Thanks for sharing your notes and poem.
-Your poem flows well and tells a story
using rhyming couplets.
-That isn't easy, but it worked.
-I like the verse about "Great news from the Doctor's lips"
and the next one about God making a point.
-A very good closing couplet.
-I am glad you are doing well and
hope you do well in this contest, too.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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-Here's to your determination not to give up.
-Thanks for sharing your notes and poem.
-Your poem flows well and tells a story
using rhyming couplets.
-That isn't easy, but it worked.
-I like the verse about "Great news from the Doctor's lips"
and the next one about God making a point.
-A very good closing couplet.
-I am glad you are doing well and
hope you do well in this contest, too.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Pam. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
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You are very welcome, Earl, and not problem about taking a while to reply. Hope you have a very good 2022!!
Comment from LJbutterfly
I am so thankful you posted this poem/story as I am currently dealing with spinal issues. This poem serves as inspiration for anyone facing difficult challenges. Your clearly expressed message is more important than the meter and rhymes. This entry is definitely a contender in the contest, and I wish you well.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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I am so thankful you posted this poem/story as I am currently dealing with spinal issues. This poem serves as inspiration for anyone facing difficult challenges. Your clearly expressed message is more important than the meter and rhymes. This entry is definitely a contender in the contest, and I wish you well.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Sugarray77
This is an excellent and fun poem that you have crafted to share with us. I know it will do very well in the contest. Your choice for rhymes was very good and complimented the style of 'rhyming couplets'. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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This is an excellent and fun poem that you have crafted to share with us. I know it will do very well in the contest. Your choice for rhymes was very good and complimented the style of 'rhyming couplets'. Well done and good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Melissa. Sorry it took so long to reply. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
