Worship
a Naani poetic form11 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Worship ' , is short, succinct and spiritually-uplifting. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
' Worship ' , is short, succinct and spiritually-uplifting. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much, Duchess!!! So appreciate your thoughts.
Melissa
Melissa you're very welcome.
the Duchess
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your naani is in great form, Melissa. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is perfect to pair with your well thought out words. I like the touches of alliteration and the message. This is a great Christmas poem even if that isn't what you intended.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
Your naani is in great form, Melissa. I enjoyed reading it. The picture is perfect to pair with your well thought out words. I like the touches of alliteration and the message. This is a great Christmas poem even if that isn't what you intended.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Hi Jan. Thank you for your lovely remarks on the Naani. I was thinking about Christmas and I guess it showed through :)
Melissa
Comment from jaded831
Your poem expresses warmth through the cold. Your words paint a glowing picture. Your picture adds to your presentation. Together they are the perfect pair. You should do well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
Your poem expresses warmth through the cold. Your words paint a glowing picture. Your picture adds to your presentation. Together they are the perfect pair. You should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much!!
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a really good Naani. You have been very creative in your description. I usually stay away from the short stuff, but you have grabbed my attention with this poem.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
This is a really good Naani. You have been very creative in your description. I usually stay away from the short stuff, but you have grabbed my attention with this poem.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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Hello Paul. Thanks so much!!
Melissa
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Write a Naani ~ Winter Weather writing prompt Contest. Good Naani form. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
Excellent entry for the Write a Naani ~ Winter Weather writing prompt Contest. Good Naani form. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 25-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much, Gypsy!
Comment from lyenochka
A lovely Christmas naani with such a peaceful picture. I like that in the "robes of snowy white," the Earth worships her Creator. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
A lovely Christmas naani with such a peaceful picture. I like that in the "robes of snowy white," the Earth worships her Creator. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thank you,Helen.
Comment from Sally Law
Just beautiful, mystery poet, and a truly worshipful sight to experience. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
Just beautiful, mystery poet, and a truly worshipful sight to experience. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sally :))
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thank you!!
Comment from roof35
This is an excellent entry for the Naani Winter Weather contest. Your illustration, of course, is beautiful and sets the stages for you words. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
This is an excellent entry for the Naani Winter Weather contest. Your illustration, of course, is beautiful and sets the stages for you words. Nicely done.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much!!
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Thanks so much!!
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice poem
With some touching and evocative imagery, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and is nicely structured. Thanks for sharing this
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
This is a very nice poem
With some touching and evocative imagery, I enjoyed reading it. It flows well and is nicely structured. Thanks for sharing this
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the "Write a Naani ~ Winter Weather writing prompt" and best wishes in the contest;-) Your words were exemplary and flowed nicely throughout the piece! You nailed the short poem it's perfection! I can only give you 5 stars because I'm out of 6 stars or I would certainly give you a 6 star rating;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this Christmas!
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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
Perfect entry for the "Write a Naani ~ Winter Weather writing prompt" and best wishes in the contest;-) Your words were exemplary and flowed nicely throughout the piece! You nailed the short poem it's perfection! I can only give you 5 stars because I'm out of 6 stars or I would certainly give you a 6 star rating;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this Christmas!
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Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much! I really appreciate the 'virtual' six :)
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