Winterscape
A Tyburn8 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Rod, I like your poem and how your mix of words made two images--very nice. You turned your poem from frosty to ahhh.
I can see why this poem was a Winner. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Hello Rod, I like your poem and how your mix of words made two images--very nice. You turned your poem from frosty to ahhh.
I can see why this poem was a Winner. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much, Late Bloomer, for your lovely review. Rod
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Tyburn Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the contest rules well. Good syllables count and connection between lines. It flows nicely. Good end rhymes
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Excellent entry for the Tyburn Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the contest rules well. Good syllables count and connection between lines. It flows nicely. Good end rhymes
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much, Gypsy, for your high praise of my Tyburn.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Winterscape ' , is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. My finger's are crossed for you.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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' Winterscape ' , is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest. My finger's are crossed for you.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much, duchess, for your kind praise of my Tyburn.
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Dear Anon, your very welcome.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A very nice poem for the writing prompt entry, which is a very tough structure to follow. I also love the picture that accompanies the poem and adds to the content.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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A very nice poem for the writing prompt entry, which is a very tough structure to follow. I also love the picture that accompanies the poem and adds to the content.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much, Theodore, for sharing and praising my poem.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with this complex style. The rules are confusing to most, but you handled them well. The image is a perfect pairing, too. Your rhymes are well thought out and descriptive.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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You did a great job with this complex style. The rules are confusing to most, but you handled them well. The image is a perfect pairing, too. Your rhymes are well thought out and descriptive.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much, Jan, for your kind praise and encouraging review.
Comment from Augie Medina
Very nice. Perfect accompanying image and an accomplishment to attain the required form in the context of your theme as expressed in the title. One would not think that "vivid" and "placid" go together, but here they do!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Very nice. Perfect accompanying image and an accomplishment to attain the required form in the context of your theme as expressed in the title. One would not think that "vivid" and "placid" go together, but here they do!
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much, Angie, for your close reading of my Tyburn and your kind praise.
Comment from victor 66
The wonderful thing about having a state or area that has four seasons, is that you look forward to winter and then you look forward to spring. It's a good place to be. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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The wonderful thing about having a state or area that has four seasons, is that you look forward to winter and then you look forward to spring. It's a good place to be. Best wishes.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you, victor, for sharing my poem.
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You are most welcome, Rod.
Comment from royowen
I rather like the tyburn, it's a bit of a challenge with the rhyming and the inter connective ness in the progressive work. You've done a great job with this work, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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I rather like the tyburn, it's a bit of a challenge with the rhyming and the inter connective ness in the progressive work. You've done a great job with this work, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Roy, for sharing and praising my Tyburn.
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Most welcome
