Comment from The Journaler

Excellent

An excellent poem using the parameters given to complete. Very well done. I hope you do well in the contest. Children do enjoy all those things! When they have a good snow, they also enjoy that..building!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021

Thanks.

reply by The Journaler on 29-Dec-2021

You are welcome!

Comment from Richard Montfort Cary

Excellent

Another contest entry-- well done. "Guiding hikes" is a very creative thought. Lots of work to make your Tyburn Poetry entry look easy and fun, too!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021

Thanks.

Comment from lindafisher

Excellent

This is only the second of these Tyburn poems I have read. However I am fascinated by them. You have inspired me to try to write one myself. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021

Thanks, have you read my witty 575 animal poem?

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

Nice example of the Tyburn form and you have chosen an apt subject for this piece, describing the likes of active children.

Good luck in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021

Thanks, have you read my 575 witty animal poem?

reply by kiwisteveh on 27-Dec-2021

I don't know because your identity remains a mystery!

reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021

Mine is Imagine A Bear