Wild Skies
a 2-3-2 poetic form11 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Great win Melissa!
Picture perfectly paired with your 2-3-2 contest poem entry.
You certainly accomplished a lot of meaning into just a few words.
Mark
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Great win Melissa!
Picture perfectly paired with your 2-3-2 contest poem entry.
You certainly accomplished a lot of meaning into just a few words.
Mark
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Hi Mark. so glad you liked it. I am delighted that the meaning came through with such a limited form.... it was a challenge!!
Melissa
Comment from cat frenette
I thought your poem painted a very vivid picture. You give the feeling of an impending storm with very few words. The photo you chose highlights the poem beautifully.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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I thought your poem painted a very vivid picture. You give the feeling of an impending storm with very few words. The photo you chose highlights the poem beautifully.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Hello Cat. Thanks so much!!!
Melissa
Comment from l.raven
AMEN...all have been predicted...and are
coming true...people might want to think
about getting right with Jesus...
I love your poem...very well written...
picture speaks for itself...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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AMEN...all have been predicted...and are
coming true...people might want to think
about getting right with Jesus...
I love your poem...very well written...
picture speaks for itself...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much, sweet Linda!!
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your so welcome Melissa...I love your poem...
so few words to say it like it is...hav a Happy New Year...love xxoo
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Poem flows nicely. Good presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Excellent entry for the 2-3-2 Poetry writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Poem flows nicely. Good presentation.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you Gypsy!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Great job on your contest, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it.
Your words are descriptive with the correct syllable count per line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Great job on your contest, Mystery Author.
I enjoyed reading it.
Your words are descriptive with the correct syllable count per line.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you Jan!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Wild Skies ', is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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' Wild Skies ', is short, succinct and deftly descriptive. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you Duchess!
Dear Anon,
You're very welcome!
Bless you and take care,
the Duchess
Comment from Janilou
This is an excellent poem that I had to read through several times to savor the meaning of your words. Such clever word play here.
I enjoyed it very much and I wish you all the best.
Jan
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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This is an excellent poem that I had to read through several times to savor the meaning of your words. Such clever word play here.
I enjoyed it very much and I wish you all the best.
Jan
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Saying something very meaningful in only seven syllables is quite challenging for me, but you have vividly described a scene in which the scary side of nature takes control.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Saying something very meaningful in only seven syllables is quite challenging for me, but you have vividly described a scene in which the scary side of nature takes control.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
Comment from Cindy Warren
Those skies look pretty scary. Glad I'm not there. It's nice and sunny here. The only problem is that it's -37. A good day to stay indoors and review on FS. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Those skies look pretty scary. Glad I'm not there. It's nice and sunny here. The only problem is that it's -37. A good day to stay indoors and review on FS. Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
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Thank you!
Comment from zanya
Excellent use made here of that very succinct format of the 2-3-2 delivering a severe weather warning, so to speak and with a superb pic to illustrate
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Excellent use made here of that very succinct format of the 2-3-2 delivering a severe weather warning, so to speak and with a superb pic to illustrate
Comment Written 27-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2021
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Hello Zanya! Thank you so very much!!!
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Hello Zanya! Thank you so very much!!!
