The Tor
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Comment from Mary Shifman
It seems that I recall hearing something about music's effect on a person's mood, etc. I know some music makes me feel like I'm soaring and other makes me incredibly sad. I want to know more about this.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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It seems that I recall hearing something about music's effect on a person's mood, etc. I know some music makes me feel like I'm soaring and other makes me incredibly sad. I want to know more about this.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your involved review. Sadly, I don't know much more about it. I've been going to research it further, but never got there. I think it might have something to do with affecting brain waves. Have you ever seen the you tube presentation showing the effects of chanting on the energies? Pretty incredible. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yw13EAX3cZk
Comment from Megan Mary
I love when a text gives me lingering things to think about. A new historical sight I wonder is real, harp therapy which sounds personally useful and so poetically connected. Enjoyed this a lot!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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I love when a text gives me lingering things to think about. A new historical sight I wonder is real, harp therapy which sounds personally useful and so poetically connected. Enjoyed this a lot!
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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If you'd like to catch up. Go to my portfolio. There is no need for reviewing. Just enjoy. You might want to become a fan so you will get the riches of the next chapters.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
This narrative is excellent however the storyline was very interesting and held my attention throughout the piece!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Years ahead;-)
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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This narrative is excellent however the storyline was very interesting and held my attention throughout the piece!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family this New Years ahead;-)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Comment from aryr
This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. I really enjoyed reading about the different effects the harpist had on everyone. It really is important that the harpist becomes one with the individual. I find it interesting about dowsing, I was taught with copper rods but have since learned with a pendulum. It was wonderful that you mentioned the energy of Stonehenge, there is indeed a lot there. Be safe, be happy, be careful. Happy New Year's!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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This was a great continuation chapter, Liz. I really enjoyed reading about the different effects the harpist had on everyone. It really is important that the harpist becomes one with the individual. I find it interesting about dowsing, I was taught with copper rods but have since learned with a pendulum. It was wonderful that you mentioned the energy of Stonehenge, there is indeed a lot there. Be safe, be happy, be careful. Happy New Year's!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
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This was great, Liz, I look forward to the next chapter.
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Thank you for your loyalty. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is an interesting portion of the story. It does make sense that people might have a different reactions to certain chords. Am I supposed to know what she means about the boys being released, or is this part of the plot?
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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This is an interesting portion of the story. It does make sense that people might have a different reactions to certain chords. Am I supposed to know what she means about the boys being released, or is this part of the plot?
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. You are right, it is part of the obscure Thank you for your enthusiasticuy7777777ji6555555555555t?plot
Comment from Gert sherwood
Your chapter in the book The Tor
Time
Liz O'Neill,
I was so fascinated from your Dowsing method by using a harp to put one in a happy mood when depressed. And the feeling of being able to put you in the stage of being so relaxed.
Gert
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Your chapter in the book The Tor
Time
Liz O'Neill,
I was so fascinated from your Dowsing method by using a harp to put one in a happy mood when depressed. And the feeling of being able to put you in the stage of being so relaxed.
Gert
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad it fascinates you too. It certainly does me.
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Liz O'Neill
You are most welcome
Gert
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is all very interesting, Liz. I've never heard of harp therapy before. I'll have to look that up. Your reference to the many places in England where energy might be sensed, is a good idea to mix with your story. Well done.
Just a few suggestions:
"We were to notice the change(,) that chord had on us" - comma not needed here.
"When the one in the center appeared to be relaxing, and reported feeling ? (I think a word is missing here) and the first group felt relaxed, the other of us felt depressed."
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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This is all very interesting, Liz. I've never heard of harp therapy before. I'll have to look that up. Your reference to the many places in England where energy might be sensed, is a good idea to mix with your story. Well done.
Just a few suggestions:
"We were to notice the change(,) that chord had on us" - comma not needed here.
"When the one in the center appeared to be relaxing, and reported feeling ? (I think a word is missing here) and the first group felt relaxed, the other of us felt depressed."
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review. I'm glad to know how it comes across.
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You?re welcome, Liz. See you in the new year!
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***right on***
Comment from Mabaker12
This is so interesting, Liz. I like many others, would know very little about harpist Dowsing. This story is educating as well as exciting. I certainly.wont give you a four. You are far too clever for that insult. Love U Anne.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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This is so interesting, Liz. I like many others, would know very little about harpist Dowsing. This story is educating as well as exciting. I certainly.wont give you a four. You are far too clever for that insult. Love U Anne.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your enthusiastic review and your encouraging words. Sweeet. And 6 shiney ones.
Comment from lyenochka
Another interesting chapter which whets our appetite for the places they will soon visit. I like the example of the effects of the harp therapy. I also thought of how Americans are immediately identified by their enthusiastic chatter worldwide.
"I can wait to see that." (can't?) She was interested or not?
what we had just experience, (experienced)
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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Another interesting chapter which whets our appetite for the places they will soon visit. I like the example of the effects of the harp therapy. I also thought of how Americans are immediately identified by their enthusiastic chatter worldwide.
"I can wait to see that." (can't?) She was interested or not?
what we had just experience, (experienced)
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your supportive review. I find using an apostrophe makes weird letters. So maybe if I do internally it will let me. It's nice to know how it is coming across.
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When I use the Advanced Editor, I don't have a problem. In the Basic Editor copying and pasting apostrophes come out with additional characters.
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I found if I put the apostrophe in from here, it seems to take. I know I have several with just s. I also need to remember if I'm going to use Advanced, do it before anything else, because it erases everything you've posted.
Thank you for that tip
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I only use the Advanced Editor so I can't even remember the Basic Editor. Like you said, typing or re-typing any apostrophes in Fanstory keeps those gremlin characters from chewing up the text. 💖
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***chuckle***
Comment from Janilou
Although I struggled to understand some of this chapter I did find it very interesting and your author's notes are intriguing. I found no errors. The only suggestion I would have would be to spell out the numbers. For example six instead of 6 ... eleven instead of 11 etc.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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Although I struggled to understand some of this chapter I did find it very interesting and your author's notes are intriguing. I found no errors. The only suggestion I would have would be to spell out the numbers. For example six instead of 6 ... eleven instead of 11 etc.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 28-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your involved review. Could I explain something for you?You could go to my portfolio to catch up. No review necessary. Just enjoy.
