I Love Snow
Children do too.2 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Might want to have a relook at the syllables count here -
Line 3 has four syllables when it should only have three. From this point on the syllable count is off (the next has 6)
I get the cyclical nature of the first and last line but does using the same word constitute a rhyme.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Hi there,
Might want to have a relook at the syllables count here -
Line 3 has four syllables when it should only have three. From this point on the syllable count is off (the next has 6)
I get the cyclical nature of the first and last line but does using the same word constitute a rhyme.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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I fixed it, and my poem is better than good.
Comment from Gee
Excellent job!
The diatelle is hard. You did a great job.
I appreciate you sharing
Happy holidays
And I hope to see more of your work in the upcoming year.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Excellent job!
The diatelle is hard. You did a great job.
I appreciate you sharing
Happy holidays
And I hope to see more of your work in the upcoming year.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2021
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Thanks.
