Comment from writer723

Excellent

I really enjoyed reading your story. You have such a wonderful way with words and are quite adept at expressing yourself. I found this writing to be very interesting. It held my attention throughout. Your vivid descriptions made it easy for me to visualize the scenario you were writing about. Your story really kept me in suspense. Excellent job!

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2022

Hey, writer723. Thank you so much for checking out my portfolio. Not many people do that anymore. I really appreciate the stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece.

=]

Ron

Comment from chatterbox1

Excellent

Careful what you ask for. Curious how curiosity can bite you in the butt...

I could go on, but I think you've been pun-ished enough. Love the surprise ending.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021

Thank you for the hilarious review, Chatterbox. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

Ron

Comment from Malerie

Excellent

This certainly gave me a chuckle. As I read your story it kept me guessing what would happen next. Well put together and keeps the reader interested. The ending was hilarious, so that's who brings the pit of gold at the end of the rainbow, for sure can't miss him.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021

Thank you for the great review, Malerie. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a laugh at this silliness.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

YAY! I have read a couple of these entries to date and yours is the first one that follows the rules AND seems to have a nice firm storyline. Great job! I wish you good luck in the voting~

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2021

Thank you for the fantastic review, Robyn. I really appreciate the stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece.