The Walkers
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "The Party at the River"The Final Gabriel Hope Journey
9 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
We are always happy to hear the story of Good overcoming the Evil forces in this world of ours. I wish it was true, but it isn't that easy. Love your stories though, Mike. Gabriel Hope gives us hope of better times to come. I am a fan. LOL Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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We are always happy to hear the story of Good overcoming the Evil forces in this world of ours. I wish it was true, but it isn't that easy. Love your stories though, Mike. Gabriel Hope gives us hope of better times to come. I am a fan. LOL Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hi, Nancy. This one was fun to write. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Nancy. This one was fun to write. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Ric Myworld
Now you gone and taken me back to another place in time that I hadn't even expected with your inclusion of the line about the old Nash Rambler. LOL. I haven't heard that name in years. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Now you gone and taken me back to another place in time that I hadn't even expected with your inclusion of the line about the old Nash Rambler. LOL. I haven't heard that name in years. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hi, Ric. My mother owned one. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Ric. My mother owned one. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Good writing. Good story.
before we get there," then Cal - make into two sentences??
Cris jumps in the back of a Ford pick-up truck then says, - "and" then, or just "and" ??
You should look at each time you say "then".
Best wishes for you.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Good writing. Good story.
before we get there," then Cal - make into two sentences??
Cris jumps in the back of a Ford pick-up truck then says, - "and" then, or just "and" ??
You should look at each time you say "then".
Best wishes for you.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hi, Wayne. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Wayne. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Lordinajamjar
This is my first taste of your book, Mike, but I will definitely come back for more.
I like the characters you have created. It's almost as if they all could be taken straight from the pages of the bible to be reborn in a Marvel comic. This is fun read of the never ending war of good versus evil.
Well done Mike.
Keep on writing
John
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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This is my first taste of your book, Mike, but I will definitely come back for more.
I like the characters you have created. It's almost as if they all could be taken straight from the pages of the bible to be reborn in a Marvel comic. This is fun read of the never ending war of good versus evil.
Well done Mike.
Keep on writing
John
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hello, my friend. This story would make a great comic. Thank you for your kind words and shiny stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hello, my friend. This story would make a great comic. Thank you for your kind words and shiny stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BethShelby
This is quite a war you have going and it is an actual war of destruction and not a spiritual battle. Michael and Gabriel have some amazing talents. You have listed many different kinds of demons. I wonder where you found this information.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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This is quite a war you have going and it is an actual war of destruction and not a spiritual battle. Michael and Gabriel have some amazing talents. You have listed many different kinds of demons. I wonder where you found this information.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hi, Beth. There are several classifications of demons on the internet. I used the Binsfield. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Beth. There are several classifications of demons on the internet. I used the Binsfield. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
The heavenly are on the move once again and the enemy is still active on the earth, but these guys are huge in size and packed with authority from on high and are battling the forces of darkness, and guaranteed success because of God's power, well done Mike, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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The heavenly are on the move once again and the enemy is still active on the earth, but these guys are huge in size and packed with authority from on high and are battling the forces of darkness, and guaranteed success because of God's power, well done Mike, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You too Mike
Comment from Thatguypk
A fascinating read. As it's the first chapter I've read, I may just have to go back and start at the beginning. Obviously, this is an epic tale and one that I think I might enjoy. I'm glad I came upon it. Thank you.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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A fascinating read. As it's the first chapter I've read, I may just have to go back and start at the beginning. Obviously, this is an epic tale and one that I think I might enjoy. I'm glad I came upon it. Thank you.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Shirley McLain
Action packed chapter that I enjoyed reading. I believe this is the first chapter I have read. I didn't see any errors. Your characters are strong and the dialogue is appropriate. Have a great evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Action packed chapter that I enjoyed reading. I believe this is the first chapter I have read. I didn't see any errors. Your characters are strong and the dialogue is appropriate. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hi, Shirley. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Shirley. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Exemplary prose my friend! The storyline is captivating and interesting and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters are bouncing off each other nicely;-)
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and may God bless you and your family this New Year!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Exemplary prose my friend! The storyline is captivating and interesting and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters are bouncing off each other nicely;-)
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and may God bless you and your family this New Year!
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hi, Melodie. Thank you for your kind words and wonderful blessing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Melodie. Thank you for your kind words and wonderful blessing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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