Cozy Kitten
Acrostic poetry8 total reviews
Comment from Elliot_Moss
This is so cute! I love how you wrote the "Zzzz"s into the poem. The last line is also so sweet. Cats really can get comfy anywhere! Great poem and absolutely adorable!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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This is so cute! I love how you wrote the "Zzzz"s into the poem. The last line is also so sweet. Cats really can get comfy anywhere! Great poem and absolutely adorable!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Elliot. I am so glad you liked this one about a wee kitten. :)
Melissa
Comment from Annica
How lovely! My favorite line has to be "Enchantress from above"... I also learned the meaning of acrostic today :) Thank you for beautifully putting into words the story hidden in that cozy photo.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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How lovely! My favorite line has to be "Enchantress from above"... I also learned the meaning of acrostic today :) Thank you for beautifully putting into words the story hidden in that cozy photo.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you!!
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent rhyme and metre is this adorable acrostic. Kittens can do the cutest, and also the most annoying things imaginable.
A fine poem with excellent tone, and I wish you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Excellent rhyme and metre is this adorable acrostic. Kittens can do the cutest, and also the most annoying things imaginable.
A fine poem with excellent tone, and I wish you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you!!
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
How precious! I'm not a cat fan, particularly, but who could resist this one!??? And of course, your words are icing on a sugary, delicious cake! This is one of the smoothest, sweetest acrostics I've read. Fine, fine job!!! Thank you!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
How precious! I'm not a cat fan, particularly, but who could resist this one!??? And of course, your words are icing on a sugary, delicious cake! This is one of the smoothest, sweetest acrostics I've read. Fine, fine job!!! Thank you!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from dellsworthpoet
Nice. The poem and picture work well together. The understated background color works well. The poem flows well. The rhyme scheme is consistent and unforced. The poem is the right length for the subject, no padding or puff.
Thanks for a good read.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Nice. The poem and picture work well together. The understated background color works well. The poem flows well. The rhyme scheme is consistent and unforced. The poem is the right length for the subject, no padding or puff.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from tfawcus
Poetry doesn't get much cuter than this! Your combination of photograph and verse have created an image that begs for a response of "Ahhh!" I imagine this will garner quite a few votes in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Poetry doesn't get much cuter than this! Your combination of photograph and verse have created an image that begs for a response of "Ahhh!" I imagine this will garner quite a few votes in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Tony!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Usually some of the acrostic I read don't make any sense but yours it's stright to the point: "Caressing touches comfort her
Of that we are assured,
Zzzzs emerge from ball of fur
Instinctive and demured
Nestled in a shearling sleeve
Enchantress from above
Snuggled down, we do believe
She's wrapped in dreams of love" Thank you for sharing anf good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Usually some of the acrostic I read don't make any sense but yours it's stright to the point: "Caressing touches comfort her
Of that we are assured,
Zzzzs emerge from ball of fur
Instinctive and demured
Nestled in a shearling sleeve
Enchantress from above
Snuggled down, we do believe
She's wrapped in dreams of love" Thank you for sharing anf good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you Iza!
Comment from Tina Crute
Wonderful entry for this contest and not just because of the adorable kitten. Your words do it justice and then some. The cursive and italics give this a dreamy feel, like a fairy tale. I wonder what she is dreaming? She looks so content. I think you will do well in the contest. This one is special:)
Tina
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Wonderful entry for this contest and not just because of the adorable kitten. Your words do it justice and then some. The cursive and italics give this a dreamy feel, like a fairy tale. I wonder what she is dreaming? She looks so content. I think you will do well in the contest. This one is special:)
Tina
Comment Written 03-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2022
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Thank you Tina.
