Brian's book of poem's
Viewing comments for Chapter 37 "growing up in the 1980's "poetry
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Comment from Aspiring2Write
I feel bad giving a four star. Overall it was great. My dad grew up in a similar time, so I know what you mean. The first sentence mentions watching TV twice. You truly did a great job, and are a better writer than most people. When you said "like I said" were you referring to a previous piece that you wrote. Just wondering. I encourage you to keep on writing. It is like a diamond that needs a little polishing.
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I feel bad giving a four star. Overall it was great. My dad grew up in a similar time, so I know what you mean. The first sentence mentions watching TV twice. You truly did a great job, and are a better writer than most people. When you said "like I said" were you referring to a previous piece that you wrote. Just wondering. I encourage you to keep on writing. It is like a diamond that needs a little polishing.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
Comment from Malerie
Thanks for sharing you story; I can relate to almost everything you said, the only difference is I grew up in Florida. I think you will get more reviews if you make some edits, grammar, punctuation and caps. It's your story and these are just suggestions, I found your story interesting because I can relate to it. Thanks for sharing
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Thanks for sharing you story; I can relate to almost everything you said, the only difference is I grew up in Florida. I think you will get more reviews if you make some edits, grammar, punctuation and caps. It's your story and these are just suggestions, I found your story interesting because I can relate to it. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 05-Jan-2022