The poet within
We all are capable to write the moments in our life2 total reviews
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Great poem, however I would go over it once again because the words aren't flowing as easily as they should but I like the rhyming scheme and another suggestion would be to add an image to make the presentation complete and you may want to change the color from uninviting white to a much warmer color.
Otherwise the poem has a good start!
Thanks for sharing this piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
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Great poem, however I would go over it once again because the words aren't flowing as easily as they should but I like the rhyming scheme and another suggestion would be to add an image to make the presentation complete and you may want to change the color from uninviting white to a much warmer color.
Otherwise the poem has a good start!
Thanks for sharing this piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Poet. I think you may be right on how writing works, but it is frustrating that someone has to be in the correct mode to put words to paper. This is good as it says something worth hearing, however, I think you could tighten it up just a little to have more impact. Hope you are safe and happy! xoxo Kiwi
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Hi Poet. I think you may be right on how writing works, but it is frustrating that someone has to be in the correct mode to put words to paper. This is good as it says something worth hearing, however, I think you could tighten it up just a little to have more impact. Hope you are safe and happy! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 06-Jan-2022
