Frog Taxi
Cinquain8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Frog Taxi, has the right set up and brings some of us back to our days in the arcade trying to get the Frogger across the highway and then th3 river. Nice.
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This cinquain, Frog Taxi, has the right set up and brings some of us back to our days in the arcade trying to get the Frogger across the highway and then th3 river. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Wow, I am at awe of the volunteers caring so much for the frogs.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
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Beautiful entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
Wow, I am at awe of the volunteers caring so much for the frogs.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I wonder where these types of animals hibernate during winter. Do you think they are alive in this freezing conditions? I am told they hibernate under the freezing water. Mom always told me not to touch frogs as they produce warts. Good advice.
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I wonder where these types of animals hibernate during winter. Do you think they are alive in this freezing conditions? I am told they hibernate under the freezing water. Mom always told me not to touch frogs as they produce warts. Good advice.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Malerie
Interesting information. Great picture as the subject frog appears to be patiently waiting for his taxi, he definitely is not in NY. Your lines flow well and this is a good read. Thank for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Interesting information. Great picture as the subject frog appears to be patiently waiting for his taxi, he definitely is not in NY. Your lines flow well and this is a good read. Thank for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thanks for your review. From what I know about NY I'm guessing he'd be waiting a while, or telling them to hop to it :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello,
I enjoyed reading your cinquain. It is in good form, informative and well presented. I love that this taxi service exists :)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Hello,
I enjoyed reading your cinquain. It is in good form, informative and well presented. I love that this taxi service exists :)
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the photo and the notes.
-We have a similar thing in NJ with turtles.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes the scene well.
-It's great that volunteers help our native species.
-Good concluding lines.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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-Thanks for sharing the photo and the notes.
-We have a similar thing in NJ with turtles.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery describes the scene well.
-It's great that volunteers help our native species.
-Good concluding lines.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thanks for your review. I'd never heard of this until I was "topic hunting" through the Net. It struck a chord with me.
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You are welcome. I didn't know one could "topic hunt" on the net! I'll have to try that.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The frogs itch a ride on a taxi? How quaint is that, nature finds a way to ensure their species survive and make use of the local transport it seems, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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The frogs itch a ride on a taxi? How quaint is that, nature finds a way to ensure their species survive and make use of the local transport it seems, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thanks very much for your review.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
Congratulations for a five lines as well a 2-4-6-8-2 syllables compliant Cinquain Poetry Writing Prompt Entry.
The work highlights a dark night, when frogs taxi across the streets in a breeding spree.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of metaphor and a strict compliance with the Cinquain structure.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Congratulations for a five lines as well a 2-4-6-8-2 syllables compliant Cinquain Poetry Writing Prompt Entry.
The work highlights a dark night, when frogs taxi across the streets in a breeding spree.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of metaphor and a strict compliance with the Cinquain structure.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2022
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Thanks for your review.
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Remain Blessed.
