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I shouldn't have said that2 total reviews
Comment from Debra White
Hello :)
I often have the same problem!
Good use of the cinquain form and we'll presented. I particularly like that you injected a little rhyme between lines 2 and 3 and the word 'twirling' gives a fun visual to those words that are about to blurt.
Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Debra
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Hello :)
I often have the same problem!
Good use of the cinquain form and we'll presented. I particularly like that you injected a little rhyme between lines 2 and 3 and the word 'twirling' gives a fun visual to those words that are about to blurt.
Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Debra
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you. I had fun playing with that and I'm glad it gave you a smile.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I can identify with these words here, sometimes we just can't help spilling the beans and then the fun starts and we wish we hadn't, been there, done that, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Ha ha ha, I can identify with these words here, sometimes we just can't help spilling the beans and then the fun starts and we wish we hadn't, been there, done that, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Oh ya ain't that the truth. I'm glad it gave you a smile.
