I Thanked God
A wonderful, forever lasting love.40 total reviews
Comment from nomi338
I am so sorry for your loss, no matter how recent. Please remember that we are a product of God's immense and intense love. That being said, he would never abandon his creation. Your loved one will live again. The god who cannot lie, has already promised it.
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I am so sorry for your loss, no matter how recent. Please remember that we are a product of God's immense and intense love. That being said, he would never abandon his creation. Your loved one will live again. The god who cannot lie, has already promised it.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
Comment from Ulla
Aw, this is such a lovely love poem and really heartbreaking. At the same time it's also full of hope. That one day you'll meet up again when the time is right.
It's beautifully written and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
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Aw, this is such a lovely love poem and really heartbreaking. At the same time it's also full of hope. That one day you'll meet up again when the time is right.
It's beautifully written and I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
A beautiful heart-breaking poem for this contest, good luck. I think you have captured a moment extremely well. My wife had a heart attack, and I was not with her at the end. Well-done.
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A beautiful heart-breaking poem for this contest, good luck. I think you have captured a moment extremely well. My wife had a heart attack, and I was not with her at the end. Well-done.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoy unconditional love romance, not the lust people write about today. I completely enjoyed reading this entry. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for sharing this writing prompt entry with us. I enjoy unconditional love romance, not the lust people write about today. I completely enjoyed reading this entry. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is such a beautifully written romance poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme.
We were holding hands,
When she passed away.
I lost the best part
Of my heart that Day. Very sad. Beautiful photo to compliment your words.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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This is such a beautifully written romance poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme scheme.
We were holding hands,
When she passed away.
I lost the best part
Of my heart that Day. Very sad. Beautiful photo to compliment your words.
Comment Written 10-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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thank you, Joanne, you honor me. Sorry it took so long to respond
to your review.
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from lyenochka
This is such a touching scene that you described in this poem. A love that lasted all life long is truly love and her comforting words of reunion in the Lord's house shows closeness beyond the grave. Best wishes in the contest!
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This is such a touching scene that you described in this poem. A love that lasted all life long is truly love and her comforting words of reunion in the Lord's house shows closeness beyond the grave. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well written poem for the love poetry contest. A great tribute to your wife and the love you shared. Thankful we have the hope that even though they go on before us to be with the Lord, we will meet again.
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Well written poem for the love poetry contest. A great tribute to your wife and the love you shared. Thankful we have the hope that even though they go on before us to be with the Lord, we will meet again.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Raul1
This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is beautifully written. I did enjoy reading it. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
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This poem meets the requirements for the contest. It is beautifully written. I did enjoy reading it. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Crystal Clear Visions
This is so beautiful. She's such an angel and is watching over you. No need to be sad. She is with you forever and always. Thanks for sharing. It brings joy to my heart.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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This is so beautiful. She's such an angel and is watching over you. No need to be sad. She is with you forever and always. Thanks for sharing. It brings joy to my heart.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Crystal, you honor me with such a nice review, sorry it took so long to respond.
Comment from RGstar
Virtual Six ++++++It's times like his I wish I had more sixes.
Just beautifully written...unforced, I felt every word. Such a calm and measured way this is written, and deserves every credit.
A lovely thing
Well done.
Best wishes.
RGstar
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Virtual Six ++++++It's times like his I wish I had more sixes.
Just beautifully written...unforced, I felt every word. Such a calm and measured way this is written, and deserves every credit.
A lovely thing
Well done.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
