I Thanked God
A wonderful, forever lasting love.40 total reviews
Comment from zanya
What a beautiful loving tribute to a beloved partner narrated with tenderness and filled with gratitude for being blessed with great love for life's journey - condoleances on your loss.
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What a beautiful loving tribute to a beloved partner narrated with tenderness and filled with gratitude for being blessed with great love for life's journey - condoleances on your loss.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-It is a very nice photo and a good presentation.
-Thanks for sharing it and the poem.
-I am sorry for your loss, but you wrote
a lovely tribute to her and how much she meant to you.
-Each line shows the love you had for each other.
-You were there to comfort her, but it sounds like
she was trying to do the same for you, as she said,
"Don't be sad.
True love never dies."
-A lovely poem; good luck in the contest.
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-It is a very nice photo and a good presentation.
-Thanks for sharing it and the poem.
-I am sorry for your loss, but you wrote
a lovely tribute to her and how much she meant to you.
-Each line shows the love you had for each other.
-You were there to comfort her, but it sounds like
she was trying to do the same for you, as she said,
"Don't be sad.
True love never dies."
-A lovely poem; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Gee
That was excellent. I enjoyed your memory.
It allows the reader to envision being there and feeling your sorrow.
I think this will do well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
It's appreciated.
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That was excellent. I enjoyed your memory.
It allows the reader to envision being there and feeling your sorrow.
I think this will do well in the contest.
Thanks for sharing.
It's appreciated.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from ESOSTINE
Well written with good flow and rhyming. Thanks for sharing your world, and please accept my sincere condolences. Not quite easy to lose a spouse let alone a lovely one. Lol!
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Well written with good flow and rhyming. Thanks for sharing your world, and please accept my sincere condolences. Not quite easy to lose a spouse let alone a lovely one. Lol!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
That is a good one. It brings out the emotion in he reader. At my age, I am constantly thinking about the passing of myself or my wife, and I always wonder about the emotion that will be experienced.
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That is a good one. It brings out the emotion in he reader. At my age, I am constantly thinking about the passing of myself or my wife, and I always wonder about the emotion that will be experienced.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Love is truly, really, practically and eternally expressed, love never dies, she passed away speaking the state and stand of love, you thanked God for God made her your love; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Love is truly, really, practically and eternally expressed, love never dies, she passed away speaking the state and stand of love, you thanked God for God made her your love; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' I Thanked God ', is an exceptionally well-written and heart wrenching piece. With craft and skill. This talented poet told it as it is, To me this is six. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
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' I Thanked God ', is an exceptionally well-written and heart wrenching piece. With craft and skill. This talented poet told it as it is, To me this is six. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Losing a spouse is one of the most difficult emotional pains a person has to endure, but there is solace in remembering what your spouse meant to you. Death cannot end love. Beautifully penned poem you have presented. Words flow from your heart. Good luck!
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Losing a spouse is one of the most difficult emotional pains a person has to endure, but there is solace in remembering what your spouse meant to you. Death cannot end love. Beautifully penned poem you have presented. Words flow from your heart. Good luck!
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness these words are heartbreaking and I am so sorry for your loss. You have your memories that will stay forever, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Oh my goodness these words are heartbreaking and I am so sorry for your loss. You have your memories that will stay forever, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very lovely and truly heartfelt poem. So sad and poignant but also quite uplifting. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
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This is a very lovely and truly heartfelt poem. So sad and poignant but also quite uplifting. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Best wishes Jen.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
