Spark of Life
See notes and sweet video below.3 total reviews
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Beautiful entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
The story is very sad. I would use 'her womb' instead of tummy.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Beautiful entry for the Cinquain Poetry writing prompt contest. You followed the rules of the contest well. Beautiful presentation and imagery.
The story is very sad. I would use 'her womb' instead of tummy.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the helpful feedback .i will edit and put warm womb ( for syllable count) .
I m glad YOU found my wee poem: beautiful.
You are a very talented poetess so your praise means a lot to me ..( smile)
The shorter formats are your favourite , idem with me.. I love the challenge.
Also your presentation is alway top notch.
I have been told that poetry should not need the support of artwork to be appreciated but I love adding just the perfect pic.
Can I edit now while still on booth??
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No, you can't edit in the booth, you can edit after the contest.
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Oops I will change back then
as soon as I get my PC open ..it?s a bit old and plays up
Hopefully no one puts me on ( biggrin)
Thanks !
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PC was a good boy ..back how it was ..I?ll edit after ( biggrin)
Thanks again!
Comment from Christina D. Hissong
I thought this was a good poem done in a short form and well executed in that form and style. The only part that seemed not attached properly was the 'oh hark!' at the end.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I thought this was a good poem done in a short form and well executed in that form and style. The only part that seemed not attached properly was the 'oh hark!' at the end.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I totally agree .. if you could suggest I?m all ears .. I just couldn?t come up with something
Thanks for any help you can provide .
Keep safe!
Comment from rhonnie69
Ciao master poet: I thank you for sharing your wee witty ditty with me. You are appreciated. "I LOVE," your endeavor here in that it expresses your attitude about the miracle of the divine power of man and his woman, to obey and carry out the order of our creator. Immediately after God Created us He ordered us to: "Be fruitful and multiply." This poem made me oh! Soooo happy! And you know why. God bless you, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69...P.S....this review expresses my "hark" to your "spark...oh, hark! (smile)
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Ciao master poet: I thank you for sharing your wee witty ditty with me. You are appreciated. "I LOVE," your endeavor here in that it expresses your attitude about the miracle of the divine power of man and his woman, to obey and carry out the order of our creator. Immediately after God Created us He ordered us to: "Be fruitful and multiply." This poem made me oh! Soooo happy! And you know why. God bless you, my friend. Cordially: rhonnie69...P.S....this review expresses my "hark" to your "spark...oh, hark! (smile)
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
