A Storm To Remember
This was one of the snowstorms I recall in my childhood21 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
You have written memories of times long gone powerfully, as though they were only last winter. I especially enjoyed the way you managed to get both the good and the bad of those times into such a short story.
Potential SPAGs:
the wind lulls me to sleep > the wind lulled me to sleep (tense consistency)
we must have all the chores done > we had to have all the chores done
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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You have written memories of times long gone powerfully, as though they were only last winter. I especially enjoyed the way you managed to get both the good and the bad of those times into such a short story.
Potential SPAGs:
the wind lulls me to sleep > the wind lulled me to sleep (tense consistency)
we must have all the chores done > we had to have all the chores done
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Yep, your right. I will edit and correct. You know I wrote the word lulled and grammarly told me it was incorrect. I didn't think it was either.
