Jars
Kyrielle sonnet54 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a skillfully-written, moving, deeply spiritual poem about good and evil, both of which vie for our lives and our souls. I'm so glad the stalking "wolf" must bow to the Protector Shepherd. John 10 is my favorite chapter.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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This is a skillfully-written, moving, deeply spiritual poem about good and evil, both of which vie for our lives and our souls. I'm so glad the stalking "wolf" must bow to the Protector Shepherd. John 10 is my favorite chapter.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks Janice, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done kyrielle sonnet about grief and maybe maybe hanging on to to too long. Maybe you need to kill that hawk and then you can move on. It oould also be about depression or addiction.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
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This is a well done kyrielle sonnet about grief and maybe maybe hanging on to to too long. Maybe you need to kill that hawk and then you can move on. It oould also be about depression or addiction.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks Joan, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
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Don?t mention it, Roy.
Joan
Comment from Aspiring2Write
This is a wonderful poem Royowen. God is the good shepherd. You wrote it with truths beautifully integrated. Wish you the best in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
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This is a wonderful poem Royowen. God is the good shepherd. You wrote it with truths beautifully integrated. Wish you the best in your future writing.
Yours Truly,
Joshua Law
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks Joshua, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Roy your Kyrielle sonnet Jars
I know is perfect., last line about the wolf yet in the night doth stalk.
I relive you are saying there are many temptations that lurk in the night and day one cannot resist is to take the easy road
Gert
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Roy your Kyrielle sonnet Jars
I know is perfect., last line about the wolf yet in the night doth stalk.
I relive you are saying there are many temptations that lurk in the night and day one cannot resist is to take the easy road
Gert
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks Gert, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
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You are so welcome Roy
Gert
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Roy, you are most welcome
Gert
Comment from robyn corum
Roy,
This is a lovely piece of poetry dedicated to the idea that we must be on guard against the devil and his wiles at all times. We always think we are quite strong, but it's easy to slip. Thanks!
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Roy,
This is a lovely piece of poetry dedicated to the idea that we must be on guard against the devil and his wiles at all times. We always think we are quite strong, but it's easy to slip. Thanks!
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Thanks Robyn, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
Roy, This is a very well written Spiritual Kyrielle sonnet you have penned about jars. You used very good scripture and true words with very nice imagery and scriptures. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Roy, This is a very well written Spiritual Kyrielle sonnet you have penned about jars. You used very good scripture and true words with very nice imagery and scriptures. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks Teri, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Artasylum
I have never done one of these and am now inspired to try... So, highbrow and lovely... beautifully written as usual Roy
I know not how, but I believe,
and I enjoy the fool's reprieve.
The hunter hovers like a hawk*,
yet in the night the wolf doth stalk
Love it... di
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I have never done one of these and am now inspired to try... So, highbrow and lovely... beautifully written as usual Roy
I know not how, but I believe,
and I enjoy the fool's reprieve.
The hunter hovers like a hawk*,
yet in the night the wolf doth stalk
Love it... di
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks Di, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from nomi338
The Bible provides so many warnings regarding and concerning false prophets. Unfortunately, those who do not read the Bible or who disregard its warnings, they will fall victims to men like Jim Jones, David Koresh and so many others who have led the unwary to their destruction.
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The Bible provides so many warnings regarding and concerning false prophets. Unfortunately, those who do not read the Bible or who disregard its warnings, they will fall victims to men like Jim Jones, David Koresh and so many others who have led the unwary to their destruction.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks Bro, for these beautiful comments and review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I fear we have many false prophets in today's world attempting to lead us astray. I know I pray for the US all day everyday, and for the world. The US is not the only ones in danger. I know God's will will be done.
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I fear we have many false prophets in today's world attempting to lead us astray. I know I pray for the US all day everyday, and for the world. The US is not the only ones in danger. I know God's will will be done.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks Barbara, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Terry Broxson
You chose an interesting and challenging form of poetry for this work. I think you did a wonderful job with it. It is full of very good imagery, and I really do like the repeated line. "The wolf doth stalk." Good work.
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You chose an interesting and challenging form of poetry for this work. I think you did a wonderful job with it. It is full of very good imagery, and I really do like the repeated line. "The wolf doth stalk." Good work.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thanks Terry for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
