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Kyrielle sonnet

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Comment from Anne Johnston
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As usual you have penned a great poem. There are many false prophets in our world today, spreading doom and gloom, but thankfully, we can trust the Lord to guide us in what we listen to and believe.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
    Thanks Anne, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
reply by Anne Johnston on 11-Jan-2022
    You are welcome, Roy
Comment from Boogienights
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Danger lurks everywhere, but if we are careful in life, we don't have to worry. I absolutely love the repeating line, it give it a wonderful rhythm. Thank you for sharing. :)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
    Thanks so much for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Judy Lawless
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I really enjoyed reading this sonnet, Roy. It has a good rhythm, and the message you've shared is one we all need to pay attention to. It can relate to many things in life. Well done.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
    Thanks Judy for these beaut comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from scongrove
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Fantastic writing! :) And I love the artwork too!
The message is wise. Indeed, we must be careful of those who wear sheep's clothing, but underneath, they are the wolf.
Thanks for sharing!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
    Thanks Shana, for these marvellous comments blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
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An amazing Kyrielle sonnet Roy and your wisdom shines through like a beacon. With each line, the reader is drawn into the poem and the scriptures you chose are perfect for this piece. Truly, "the Wolf" is always there waiting to devour.

Well done my friend.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
    Thanks Janet, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Jeffrey Ford
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I think that you wrote a great post! It is very well written. I think it's an example of way to deal with adversity and overcoming sadness. It is very real and inspirational to express the pain to get through it.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
    Thanks Jeffrey, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from HarryT
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A wonderful effort with a tough format. However, I believe the quote in the picture detracts from the poem itself. Quoting the psalms also not needed. The poem itself carries the message.

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
    Thanks Harry, for these splendid comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Gee
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oh, interesting a Kyrielle Sonnet.
Did you enter this in the Kyrielle contest?
It flowed well. Using 8 syllables is difficult.
Thanks for sharing. We appreciate it

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
    Thanks Gee, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Begin Again
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Your words always seem to be there when I need them and I am so appreciative of all the wisdom and love of God you share. It seems as if the wolves keep circling and waiting for the weakest to stumble. We must remain vigil in our beliefs.

Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
    Thanks Carol, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Listen only to a real prophet, beware of false prophets, real or true owner of sheep never leave their sheep in dangers, fake cry for sheep is never profitable; fake owner of sheep leave sheep and wolfs devour; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
    Thanks for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy