Bubbles in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Everlasting Love"Tenitive name of Poetry Book.
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very beautifully written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme.beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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This is a very beautifully written love poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme.beautiful photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
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Thank you Joanne. I appreciate the review and nice comments. I won second in the contest.
Beth
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Awesome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the flow and the end rhymes and your sentiment is loving and faithful, much enjoyed and you won my vote.
Because you used never in the previous line, I would suggest this instead:
"You (didn't) looked at other girls"
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed the flow and the end rhymes and your sentiment is loving and faithful, much enjoyed and you won my vote.
Because you used never in the previous line, I would suggest this instead:
"You (didn't) looked at other girls"
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Thank you Dolly. I appreciate your review and your vote. I didn't notice I used never twice. I fixed it.
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Great job x x x
Comment from LisaMay
This is so beautifully expressed that it surely deserves to win the contest. I like how the strength and depth of love develops over time. An eternal love such as this is most surely a blessing from God.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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This is so beautifully expressed that it surely deserves to win the contest. I like how the strength and depth of love develops over time. An eternal love such as this is most surely a blessing from God.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, LisaMay. I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful poem indeed, smoothly flowing, well constructed, unforced rhyme. The theme of such a cherished love, with the journey through all of life is finely expressed. Best wishes for this lovely entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Beautiful poem indeed, smoothly flowing, well constructed, unforced rhyme. The theme of such a cherished love, with the journey through all of life is finely expressed. Best wishes for this lovely entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Wendy. I so glad you liked my poem. I appreciate the review and comments.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, your poem is a tribute to everlasting love, indeed.
The poem reads and flows well and has silky rhyming within.
I especially liked:
With passing years, I loved you more
than on our wedding day.
You proved to me a million times
your love was here to stay.
(Wow)
And:
Love isn't something meant to die.
The gift come from above.
When it is nourished here on earth,
death never stops one's love.
(Everlasting Love, indeed--just beautiful)
A poem from the heart. Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Hello author, your poem is a tribute to everlasting love, indeed.
The poem reads and flows well and has silky rhyming within.
I especially liked:
With passing years, I loved you more
than on our wedding day.
You proved to me a million times
your love was here to stay.
(Wow)
And:
Love isn't something meant to die.
The gift come from above.
When it is nourished here on earth,
death never stops one's love.
(Everlasting Love, indeed--just beautiful)
A poem from the heart. Well chosen artwork. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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This is beautiful review. I'm so glad you liked my poem. I enjoyed your comment and the six stars you gave me. Thanks so much.
Comment from Gee
That was beautifully done.
I enjoyed it. I didn't know where it was going, and you did a fantastic job moving us through your love. I think this is an excellent contest entry. I hope you do well. Thanks for sharing. We appreciate it.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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That was beautifully done.
I enjoyed it. I didn't know where it was going, and you did a fantastic job moving us through your love. I think this is an excellent contest entry. I hope you do well. Thanks for sharing. We appreciate it.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much Gee. I really appreciate the review and good wishes.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I love your love poem. It brims with the feeling of love and forever. I did find one little nit (Those days few) few should be flew. You did a great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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I love your love poem. It brims with the feeling of love and forever. I did find one little nit (Those days few) few should be flew. You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you Shirley. I really appreciate the review and thank you for seeing the misspelled word.
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is a beautiful yet sad poem for this contest entry, good luck. I felt really sad when I read that he had died five years ago. I lost my wife three years ago, so I know the feeling. In verse four, I think there is a typo. "few" should be "flew," good job.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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This is a beautiful yet sad poem for this contest entry, good luck. I felt really sad when I read that he had died five years ago. I lost my wife three years ago, so I know the feeling. In verse four, I think there is a typo. "few" should be "flew," good job.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you Terry. I'm sorry for your loss. I appreciate the review and thank you for seeing the misspelling.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very well done. I was surprised that the relationship went sideways as I read on. But that was refreshing because it was told so well. Great job.
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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I thought this was very well done. I was surprised that the relationship went sideways as I read on. But that was refreshing because it was told so well. Great job.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you Michael. We were together a lot of years but death eventually separates all of us.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
How sweet! There's nothing in the world like true love that lasts through the years. A lot of things are thrown at relationships and it shows a lot about the character of those folks when you see how they handle it and stay together. Thanks!
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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Dear Mystery Writer,
How sweet! There's nothing in the world like true love that lasts through the years. A lot of things are thrown at relationships and it shows a lot about the character of those folks when you see how they handle it and stay together. Thanks!
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you Robyn. When you have someone who really loves you, you can help but love them back. Of course it takes commitment, but it is worth it.
