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Sheriff Daniels Is Saved By An Owl

12 total reviews 
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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Is this your first chapter of Codys story? Or are there other chapters? The night owl kept this story alive. I'll read the first chapters, so I know what the story is about in the very beginning.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
    Glad you enjoyed this little Cody story. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Well done. It's hard to come up with a different way to tell a first person tale. Good job. I enjoyed reading it. Nice picture. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
    Glad you enjoyed this Cody Schroder story. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Dr. Nad
Exceptional
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This is a very nice story that encapsulates not only the salvation of a sheriff, but the nuances of a young lad learning about life. The little touch of the thrown away newspaper showed the down home relateability of the connection with the reader. Thanks for sharing . Embrace the Love from Above.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 14-Jan-2022
    Glad you enjoyed this Cody Schroder story. Much appreciate the review and sixer.
reply by Dr. Nad on 14-Jan-2022
    My Privilidge to Review and Pleasure to Review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Cody Schroder - Born on FanStory. (I love his birthplace. LOL)

Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I always enjoy reading the Cody stories and this is no different. You do a good job writing them. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
    Born on FanStory. Figured that would be an eye opener. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
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This is a great story, Brett. I like your tales about Cody. Since you left us hanging in this one, I expect there will be another? The dialogue is natural and tells us something about the characters. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
    Glad you enjoyed this posting. Never know when Cody may come to visit. Appreciate the review.
reply by Judy Lawless on 13-Jan-2022
    You?re welcome, Brett.
Comment from Susan Newell
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Brett,

I really like this one. It is my introduction to Cody. I appreciated the backstory in the notes. I like that the sheriff is letting Cody know that there are events in life that defy earthly, rational explanation. Sounds like a good way to advocate for God without preaching. Dialogue is realistic and appropriate. Great story.

Sue

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
    Glad you discovered Cody. Lots of members seem to like him. Appreciate the review.
reply by Susan Newell on 14-Jan-2022
    You are very welcome.
Comment from Shirley McLain
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What a great story about survival and miracles that can happen. I did not see one mistake. Your two characters were excellent as well as the storyline. Great job. Good luck in the contest. Shirley

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
    Glad you enjoyed this little tale about Cody. Much appreciate the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Exceptional
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Now this reminded me of the kind of stories that kept me engrossed and excited to find out what would happen next when I was a kid. Unlike so many books and movies of today that seem to go on and on before setting a hook to keep my interest. This one is proof it only takes a few words to do the job. Thanks for sharing. Hope all is going well!

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
    Appreciate the sixer! Yeah, me!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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Truly, the boy's picture has been an easy identity of the character, Cody; Sheriff Daniels is saved by an owl; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
    Would prefer you did not waste my time with your cut and paste reviews that offer very little of nothing simply because you seem to be trying to set some record for the most reviews on this site. Would prefer not to have to mute you, but that remains an option.
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Your story is very interesting and easy to read. Owls are considered to be wise birds, so this story is very probable, the owl directing the man who was lost in the blizzard back to his tent. I would call it a miracle.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 13-Jan-2022
    Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
reply by Anne Johnston on 13-Jan-2022
    You are welcome.