I Love Trees
Don't ask me to choose - I love them all. (5-7-5)12 total reviews
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent poem indeed my friend! The words flowed nicely except for the past love maybe "not on their knees but
Graceful in a breeze." That is the only thing I see that would make it flow better;-) This still is a 5 star poem and well written as well!
Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
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Excellent poem indeed my friend! The words flowed nicely except for the past love maybe "not on their knees but
Graceful in a breeze." That is the only thing I see that would make it flow better;-) This still is a 5 star poem and well written as well!
Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem with an appealing subject and a great full set of line end rhymes. These rhymes appeal to me especially, as they are all visually distinct (ease-ees-eeze).
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This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem with an appealing subject and a great full set of line end rhymes. These rhymes appeal to me especially, as they are all visually distinct (ease-ees-eeze).
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2022
