Just Be You
Be yourself.3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I loved the message. It runs to us simply being satisfied with ourselves. Why try to be someone else? Better perhaps, but therein we haven't any restraints, do we? I would have punctuated it differently. There were a few run-ons when a period ending a simple sentence would have been sufficient.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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I loved the message. It runs to us simply being satisfied with ourselves. Why try to be someone else? Better perhaps, but therein we haven't any restraints, do we? I would have punctuated it differently. There were a few run-ons when a period ending a simple sentence would have been sufficient.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent free form poem
with a strong message to be yourself
and not try to emulate others.
You'll feel better about yourself,
and others will likely respond.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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You've written an excellent free form poem
with a strong message to be yourself
and not try to emulate others.
You'll feel better about yourself,
and others will likely respond.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Thatguypk
This is a good piece of writing with a good message. So often we stray from our true selves to please others, but ultimately we are stronger by being ourselves. Thank you for sharing a well-expressed ethic.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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This is a good piece of writing with a good message. So often we stray from our true selves to please others, but ultimately we are stronger by being ourselves. Thank you for sharing a well-expressed ethic.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2022
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Thank you!