My pet pelican
A delusioned bird10 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! It even made me smile. Great photo! I like the comment
above the title of this poem.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line
says it all! It even made me smile. Great photo! I like the comment
above the title of this poem.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and effective imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice presentation and effective imagery. Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks Gypsy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made effective use of your seventeen syllables in this entertaining, amusing piece about a pelican that is REALLY full of himself.
Perfect artwork
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
You have made effective use of your seventeen syllables in this entertaining, amusing piece about a pelican that is REALLY full of himself.
Perfect artwork
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks Janice
Comment from Wendy G
Wonderful photo! And I like the words with the clever rhyme - that's very witty. To get all three lines rhyming shows special thoughtfulness. Best wishes for your entry!
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
Wonderful photo! And I like the words with the clever rhyme - that's very witty. To get all three lines rhyming shows special thoughtfulness. Best wishes for your entry!
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks Wendy
Comment from Terry Broxson
An excellent poem for this contest, good luck. For such a few words, this is a pretty cool image of a pelican. The picture is great, but your work gives him the attitude that makes the poem. Good job.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
An excellent poem for this contest, good luck. For such a few words, this is a pretty cool image of a pelican. The picture is great, but your work gives him the attitude that makes the poem. Good job.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Gee
Cute, limerickishy 5-7-5 poem for the competition.
I enjoy the humor poems
I hope you do well in the competition.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Good Luck
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
Cute, limerickishy 5-7-5 poem for the competition.
I enjoy the humor poems
I hope you do well in the competition.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Good Luck
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks again Gee. I am so glad you like my funny poems
Comment from the13thpoet
Good little humorous poem. good luck in the contest. I don't know what's more crazy a pelican who thinks he can walk like a man or the man who keeps it as a bet, either way, nice poem and good luck again!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
Good little humorous poem. good luck in the contest. I don't know what's more crazy a pelican who thinks he can walk like a man or the man who keeps it as a bet, either way, nice poem and good luck again!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much
Comment from jaded831
You made me laugh early, before my morning coffee, setting my day off to a good start. Thank you for that. The picture is priceless. Together they make a perfect match. You should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
You made me laugh early, before my morning coffee, setting my day off to a good start. Thank you for that. The picture is priceless. Together they make a perfect match. You should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your very well appreciated comments.
Comment from Ashley Shipley
So simple yet effective! The image really works with the poem and gives it a new dimension. I like the rhyme and the humourous concept.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
So simple yet effective! The image really works with the poem and gives it a new dimension. I like the rhyme and the humourous concept.
Well done and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Tha m you so much.
Comment from Thatguypk
If this is a competition entry, it deserves to win. Part of the art of writing is picking the perfect subject, and with this little gem, you have picked perfectly. Blissfully simple and yet so humorous in only 3 lines. Very well done.
PK
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
If this is a competition entry, it deserves to win. Part of the art of writing is picking the perfect subject, and with this little gem, you have picked perfectly. Blissfully simple and yet so humorous in only 3 lines. Very well done.
PK
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for the great revue and the super shiny stars. Much appreciated