This Time it's Different!
Viewing comments for Prologue "A Different Time"Veronica and Mildred have another assignment,
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Comment from royowen
I've always enjoyed the time travelling, it gives me a glimpse of my science fiction loving past. So, this is a new adventure, for me, but having those "powers the be" in the background is always having the sense of lan and purpose for one's existence. But I've always thought we have. Beautifully written Sandra, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I've always enjoyed the time travelling, it gives me a glimpse of my science fiction loving past. So, this is a new adventure, for me, but having those "powers the be" in the background is always having the sense of lan and purpose for one's existence. But I've always thought we have. Beautifully written Sandra, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Roy. I was reading some of the reviews I had in the original trilogy, and you gave me some lovely ones. So far everyone has wanted them back, so I guess that will be my next novel. I have to admit, I've missed them. Thank you, my dear friend. Love and hugs, Sandra xx
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Well done
Comment from BethShelby
I think I'd would enjoy reading anything you write. I didn't find the story right away in your portfolio but I think I can pick up what is happening if you continue writing about this pair of time travelers. I enjoyed reading the start of this when I have more time I try to learn more of the background. I was surprised at Mildred's dialect because it sounds like the black dialect of the Southern US. Since she is related to Veronica but generations back I found it interesting. Is the story set in the UK?
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I think I'd would enjoy reading anything you write. I didn't find the story right away in your portfolio but I think I can pick up what is happening if you continue writing about this pair of time travelers. I enjoyed reading the start of this when I have more time I try to learn more of the background. I was surprised at Mildred's dialect because it sounds like the black dialect of the Southern US. Since she is related to Veronica but generations back I found it interesting. Is the story set in the UK?
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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What a lovely compliment, Beth, thank you so much. I will be continuing it as soon as I can. Yes, it is set in the UK. The dialect is Cornish, in the South of England. It's quite a nice sound on the ear. We have many different dialects in the UK, we might be a small country, but there are a lot of us with our own unique dialect. It's quite nice trying to guess what part they come from. :)) Thank you for this really lovely review, my friend. I loved it! Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Well, Lordy, Miss Sandra, you knows what my answer be about another story. It be a long time since we all traveled together, if you get what I means.
-I love the artwork; I don't know if that will be the cover, but I like it.
-I am glad you included all of the family with updates on each.
-Time certainly does fly, especially in this case:):)
-Hard to believe Michael and Ann are teenagers and Michael wants to be a doctor. Then there's Ann who seems to like English, and I like the inclusion of the English teacher!!
-I also like the opening of the chapter with Mildred's predicament.
-A good job with the clothes they examined and the detail of Veronica's
vision. It doesn't sound like a good situation, and we will wait a while to see what happens next.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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-Well, Lordy, Miss Sandra, you knows what my answer be about another story. It be a long time since we all traveled together, if you get what I means.
-I love the artwork; I don't know if that will be the cover, but I like it.
-I am glad you included all of the family with updates on each.
-Time certainly does fly, especially in this case:):)
-Hard to believe Michael and Ann are teenagers and Michael wants to be a doctor. Then there's Ann who seems to like English, and I like the inclusion of the English teacher!!
-I also like the opening of the chapter with Mildred's predicament.
-A good job with the clothes they examined and the detail of Veronica's
vision. It doesn't sound like a good situation, and we will wait a while to see what happens next.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I'm so pleased you you want me to write another Veronica and Mildred story. I'll get onto it as soon as I can, if not before!! Thank you so very much for this lovely review, and an even bigger thank you for giving me that golden star! So far, everyone wants me to continue, and a couple who don't know the story are going to read the last chapter where Mildred explains everything. I was so pleased to see your review, knowing how much you liked Mildred. Sending you a humongous hug, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. I am glad you got positive feedback. A hug is sent to you for bringing back the characters. I have one question.
How old was Mildred in the first book? I think that is the one where she was part of the family and helping with the children.
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Mildred entered the story as a 14 year old maid in the first book for Mrs Humphries. That was when Veronica was sent back in time and took over her body. I think I'd better write a synopsis of Mildred's role in the story for those who have forgotten and those who are new to the books. And that will not be easy!!!!! Lol.
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I had forgotten that part. Maybe a short chronology would be helpful when you decide to continue it, like Pantygynt has. It might be a little easier, and you wouldn't have to have everything.
Comment from Sally Law
Loved this. Sorry for no six. This is a splendid first chapter. A new way to solve crimes tripping through time. The key must be to stop it. Great writing as always dear. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Loved this. Sorry for no six. This is a splendid first chapter. A new way to solve crimes tripping through time. The key must be to stop it. Great writing as always dear. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Sal. I'm so pleased you enjoyed chapter one. I'll continue with it once I've sorted out a few more chapters in The Return. I'm not as clever as the rest of you who manage to write more, but I will try. Thanks for reading this one, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Of course we want to see a book with Mildred and Veronica on a new adventure. I an out of sixes but I will give you a pump to let you know I am all eyes and ears. LOL Well done. Nancy:)
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Of course we want to see a book with Mildred and Veronica on a new adventure. I an out of sixes but I will give you a pump to let you know I am all eyes and ears. LOL Well done. Nancy:)
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Oh, Nancy! Thank you so much, my dear friend! I'm getting some good responses, so I think they will be welcomed back. Aw, you are so lovely, I've a big smile on my face. Love you lots, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from damommy
Yayyyyyyyy! You know how much I love Mildred and Veronica. I'm so glad to see them back. Once tiny suggestion, if you don't mind. It took me a moment to realize Veronica was the narrator of this. You might want to make that clear at the beginning. Other than that, which is only my opinion and not an expert opinion, it's perfect! Yes, definitely bring them back!!!!!
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Yayyyyyyyy! You know how much I love Mildred and Veronica. I'm so glad to see them back. Once tiny suggestion, if you don't mind. It took me a moment to realize Veronica was the narrator of this. You might want to make that clear at the beginning. Other than that, which is only my opinion and not an expert opinion, it's perfect! Yes, definitely bring them back!!!!!
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Lol! Thank you so much, my dear sister! I'm so pleased you want them back. I'll be working on it while I'm still writing The Return. I wasn't sure what to call this one. Veronica was the narrator in the other books, but I was going to go the way Betrayal and The Return is being written so I could get into the head of both Veronica and Mildred. (Mildred's head would be so interesting to get into!!) What do you think? I'm so pleased you liked the first chapter, you have really made my day!! Thank you for that golden star, that was so very nice of you! Love you lots, my dear SATP :)) Sandra xxxx
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I think whatever way you choose to go will be exciting. Big hug for you.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I'm more than ready to read more. Who exactly is Mildred and is she the mother of the two kids and married to the doctor? For some reason I'm confused. That's not unusual for me. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I'm more than ready to read more. Who exactly is Mildred and is she the mother of the two kids and married to the doctor? For some reason I'm confused. That's not unusual for me. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Hi, Shirley. No, Veronica is the mother, and Mildred has come from the past, she died during the second world war, and was brought back to help Veronica rectify the mistakes made in the past. I wrote the first books back in 2017, 2018 and 2019, and I've been having messages and emails ever since asking me to bring them back. if you go into my portolio and find the final book in the trilogy, 'This Time it's Personal' and read the last chapter (24) you will understand who Mildred is and what has been happening. I think I'll add that to my authors notes. Thank you, my friend, your review was really helpful and I hope you will enjoy of the book. Warm hugs! Sandra xxxx
Comment from Begin Again
you nealy
want to get awful the smell off me.
Of course, you've caught my interest. Your ability to stir up the ghosts is quite a thrill and I had goosebumps already dancing across my neck. Looks like you want to travel backward in time to find some trouble. I enjoyed the story and look forward to hearing more.
Bravo! Sending my love and a bunch of hugs, Always for you, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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you nealy
want to get awful the smell off me.
Of course, you've caught my interest. Your ability to stir up the ghosts is quite a thrill and I had goosebumps already dancing across my neck. Looks like you want to travel backward in time to find some trouble. I enjoyed the story and look forward to hearing more.
Bravo! Sending my love and a bunch of hugs, Always for you, Carol
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you, thank you for picking up those nits, Carol!! I've sorted them now. I don't know if you've noticed, but I do like my ghosts!! Lol. What are we getting your next part? 'This Time - That Time' trilogy, were my first books in my journey into novels, and they went down so well on FS. They all loved Mildred. So, I'm just checking to see if they want them back. Thanks so much for your lovely, helpful review, my friend. Love and hugs. Sandra xxxx
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You seem to hold a sweet rapport with the ghosts, and I enjoy it so much. As for mine... I can feel the story, but my heart doesn't fill the pages. I am hoping these shorts will lead me back to where I want to be. Thanks for asking. Love ya, Carol
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Just keep doing what you're doing for now, it will all come back. You are a natural story teller, Carol, it won't leave you for long, your heart will be bursting to get back into it. Love you, too! xx
Comment from Thatguypk
This is my first encounter with Veronica and Mildred, but I doubt if it will be my last. I'm intrigued, so please do continue. I'll be watching out for the next chapters. Very nicely written first chapter, by way of introducing the main characters.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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This is my first encounter with Veronica and Mildred, but I doubt if it will be my last. I'm intrigued, so please do continue. I'll be watching out for the next chapters. Very nicely written first chapter, by way of introducing the main characters.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your encouraging review. I'm really pleased you want to read more. Thank you! Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment from Pantygynt
Are you going to be running two books in parallel or is this a one-off for the contest? I for one would like to see it continue. I am already intrigued by the old clothes.
This is a great start.
'At fourteen-years-old Michael was already a good six inches taller than me...' This should read 'taller than I' When in doubt as to whether it is I or me, think what it really means and put the missing verb in place.
'At fourteen-years-old Michael was already a good six inches taller than me was...' That is rubbish of course. 'At fourteen-years-old Michael was already a good six inches taller than I was...' There sounds better doesn't it but there is a problem since there is another person involved as well:
'At fourteen-years-old Michael was already a good six inches taller than either his sister, Ann or I, and a foot taller than Mildred.' This seems the most comfortable way of getting these facts across.
'Daveth'? This name looks to me to be a misspelling of the Welsh name Dafydd which is pronounced Davveathe (with a short 'a' and a hard 'th' sound at the end like breathe. In Welsh, one 'f' is a 'v' sound. To sound as an 'f' as in 'find' would need a double 'f'.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Are you going to be running two books in parallel or is this a one-off for the contest? I for one would like to see it continue. I am already intrigued by the old clothes.
This is a great start.
'At fourteen-years-old Michael was already a good six inches taller than me...' This should read 'taller than I' When in doubt as to whether it is I or me, think what it really means and put the missing verb in place.
'At fourteen-years-old Michael was already a good six inches taller than me was...' That is rubbish of course. 'At fourteen-years-old Michael was already a good six inches taller than I was...' There sounds better doesn't it but there is a problem since there is another person involved as well:
'At fourteen-years-old Michael was already a good six inches taller than either his sister, Ann or I, and a foot taller than Mildred.' This seems the most comfortable way of getting these facts across.
'Daveth'? This name looks to me to be a misspelling of the Welsh name Dafydd which is pronounced Davveathe (with a short 'a' and a hard 'th' sound at the end like breathe. In Welsh, one 'f' is a 'v' sound. To sound as an 'f' as in 'find' would need a double 'f'.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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I always get those muddled up. I'll go and correct it. Daveth was the spelling when I looked up old Cornish names for the second book in the trilogy. I guess both your spelling and the Cornish spelling are twists of David in the English spelling?
Thanks so much, Jim. If I can keep the two going, I will, it's just the reviewing for the pumps. Thanks so much for reading this part and for the help with the 'me and I'. Love and hugs. Sandra xx
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If it's Cornish forget I spoke. Yes they are all from the same linguistic root and Breton French is another out of the same stable.
