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Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I love the color and the presentaiton. What an eerie blue. Thank you so using this poem to explain the meaning of "cerulean eruption". I have learnt something while enjoying your poem.

Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much for your review and feedback. You're very kind.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Gypsy, Well that certainly is spot on in many ways, great image and compliments your 5-7-5 very nicely done. What a disaster this eruption has caused, the poor community of Tonga. We can only watch and send our best
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much for your review and feedback. You're very kind.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from GWEnos
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The picture of the blue fire is lovely since blue is my favorite color. The Haiku was beautiful. You are Ranked #14th. What more can be said. Blue-hoo, Blue-hoo. I love the picture of the gypsy too. Is that you, perchance?

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    No, I wish that was me. It's a picture of my muse. LoL

    Thank you very much for your review and feedback. You're very kind. Blue is my favorite color too.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by GWEnos on 20-Jan-2022
    I know you are lovely too, from your poem. But don't you think tattoos on your face next to your eyes would have hurt that would have liked to die. It pains me just thinking about it.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    It's a Google picture and I'm sure is make-up, not tattoo
Comment from Ricky1024
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I like this but I found it it was impossible to read with the dark background and dark purple print.
You may want to change that.
Otherwise it's a short 5/7/5 Poem.
Thanks for sharing and bringing attention to the horrible event it took place.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much for your review and feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from moongirlwriter
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I've seen these eruptions before and they are fascinating. . yet scary. I live on the West Coast, I don't remember hearing about this on the news. I do miss alot of news these days. . .too depressing Love the image you've chosen. It gave me chills but truly, beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck with this piece.

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Thank you very much for your review, I find the news depressing too.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by moongirlwriter on 20-Jan-2022
    :)