Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Steppingstone's"Musings of an old man - 2022
23 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This cascade poem, Steppingstones, reminds the readers that there is little reason to wait for life to happen. It must be chased, pursued, and not allowed to get away.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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This cascade poem, Steppingstones, reminds the readers that there is little reason to wait for life to happen. It must be chased, pursued, and not allowed to get away.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thanks for the review and comments, Bill
Comment from Anne Johnston
This is a beautiful poem, well done. I like your closing verse:
"So, pause, reflect, make time, and then you too shall surely know
Everyone's journey has a beginning and a certain end
As you traverse a life filled with nothing but steppingstones, with your servitors,
Sent as constant companions by the Master, the Chosen One."
When we trust the Lord, He has a perfect plan for our lives and will guide us safely.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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This is a beautiful poem, well done. I like your closing verse:
"So, pause, reflect, make time, and then you too shall surely know
Everyone's journey has a beginning and a certain end
As you traverse a life filled with nothing but steppingstones, with your servitors,
Sent as constant companions by the Master, the Chosen One."
When we trust the Lord, He has a perfect plan for our lives and will guide us safely.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Smiling back at a daughter of Christ!
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You are welcome.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are meaningful, thought provoking, descriptive and creative. I really liked the last stanza which puts the stepping stones of life in perspective for me. The poem flows and connects well!
The artwork compliments these words. Great Poem!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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The author's words are meaningful, thought provoking, descriptive and creative. I really liked the last stanza which puts the stepping stones of life in perspective for me. The poem flows and connects well!
The artwork compliments these words. Great Poem!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you harmnony, be well!
Comment from Janet Foor
I love poems with repeating lines and this was no exception. I enjoyed the poem and the message. Life can be filled with boulders but...we can also use them as steppingstones. A thought provoking cascade poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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I love poems with repeating lines and this was no exception. I enjoyed the poem and the message. Life can be filled with boulders but...we can also use them as steppingstones. A thought provoking cascade poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Janet, thank you and blessing back many fold!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiments here and the philosophy and faith within. I thought your poem read more like a free write than a Cascade poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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I enjoyed the sentiments here and the philosophy and faith within. I thought your poem read more like a free write than a Cascade poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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Thank you, dear friend!
Comment from Jennifer L Newcomb
This was the first time I have read a cascade poem on the site. I must say how beautiful it is. I enjoyed the writing and surely the reminder of our journey and walk as we endeavor to grow and help others. Thank you for such a lovely, well written and inspiring writing. Have a great weekend ahead.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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This was the first time I have read a cascade poem on the site. I must say how beautiful it is. I enjoyed the writing and surely the reminder of our journey and walk as we endeavor to grow and help others. Thank you for such a lovely, well written and inspiring writing. Have a great weekend ahead.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Jennifer, thank you and give the poetic style a run for it, it is worth the effort! 👍👍
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces the dynamics of free will in the affairs of men and how the Chosen One lines the path of his beloved ones to dovetail them through.
The work earns it its texture through the effective use of anecdotes that could possibly tide humanity through travails and worthwhile situations.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces the dynamics of free will in the affairs of men and how the Chosen One lines the path of his beloved ones to dovetail them through.
The work earns it its texture through the effective use of anecdotes that could possibly tide humanity through travails and worthwhile situations.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Lloyd, thank you for your thoughful review.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Sanku
great motivational poem.And a perfectly crafted cascade too. A reminder that a guide is always with us unseen and that every boulder can be seen as a stepping stone - great metaphors...
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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great motivational poem.And a perfectly crafted cascade too. A reminder that a guide is always with us unseen and that every boulder can be seen as a stepping stone - great metaphors...
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Sanku, I am honored by your gracious validation and six-stars!
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
We have a finite time here on this earth. We should know how to spend our precious time with the guidance of the Chosen One. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem. Thank you, Kit
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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We have a finite time here on this earth. We should know how to spend our precious time with the guidance of the Chosen One. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem. Thank you, Kit
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Kit, as always, thank you!
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Welcome
Comment from Theodore McDowell
I love this line: As you traverse a life filled with nothing but steppingstones,
Well done. You handled the cascading structure very well. Great poem about the journey in life with the Lord. Well done!!!!!!!
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I love this line: As you traverse a life filled with nothing but steppingstones,
Well done. You handled the cascading structure very well. Great poem about the journey in life with the Lord. Well done!!!!!!!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you so very much for your review and comments.
