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Heart Crafted Poems - 2022

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Musings of an old man - 2022

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Comment from Melodie Michelle
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Perfect entry for the Club entry for the "~ Cascade ~ week of 1-19-2022 " event in "Potlatch Poetry"! Best of wishes in the contest my friend;-) The words flowed nicely throughout the piece!
Thank you for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Melodie, as always thank you fo much for your review and comments.
reply by Melodie Michelle on 20-Jan-2022
    ;-)
Comment from royowen
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This is a different cascade poem Jim, a little different from the normal ones that I've seen, which are normally in triplets but that's ok, it seems it can be any length and presumably and meter, but this I superbly written dear friend, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    Roy, as always the case I appreciate your review comments and friendship.
reply by royowen on 20-Jan-2022
    Most welcome
Comment from Thatguypk
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This is a well-constructed Cascade, but more importantly, a strong and endearing expression of your faith. Your imagery of the path that is laid out before us all is very well captured. Thanks for sharing.
PK

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
    PK, thanks a bunch!