How it Started
2 Women sit at a deserted bar contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
...and the mystery is: Do they like reading them or writing them?
I see you are at your piss-taking again - you pull it off time after time (and you write clever stories too).
How did you know that when I sat down at the computer just now I wasn't in the mood to read an interminably long-winded gas-bagging turgid tale of tedium? Thanks for being a mind reader.
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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...and the mystery is: Do they like reading them or writing them?
I see you are at your piss-taking again - you pull it off time after time (and you write clever stories too).
How did you know that when I sat down at the computer just now I wasn't in the mood to read an interminably long-winded gas-bagging turgid tale of tedium? Thanks for being a mind reader.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2022
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lol. Yeah, many people add a lot more details than I'm willing to read. If it doesn't hold my attention all the way through, I quickly lose interest. I'm glad I was reading your mind today. lol I really appreciate the generous stars, Lisa.
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Comment from Thatguypk
Haha! I wish I had six stars to give you. You would deserve them just for being a smart ass! Very clever little story. Such wit. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
PK
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Haha! I wish I had six stars to give you. You would deserve them just for being a smart ass! Very clever little story. Such wit. I loved it. Thanks for sharing.
PK
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Yeah, I love doing that on here. Lol. Thank you for the great review and big six offer, PK. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this ridiculous piece. That's all I was really going for.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A woman sits in a deserted restaurant and another woman joins her and their lifelong friendship started; nothing surprising or strange, interest is common, so they became friends, reading is their common genre; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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A woman sits in a deserted restaurant and another woman joins her and their lifelong friendship started; nothing surprising or strange, interest is common, so they became friends, reading is their common genre; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Al. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from the13thpoet
Well hello there unnamed writer if your intention was to take the reader through as many emotions with as few words as you could you succeeded. I went from curious to annoyed to entertained in such a short span. good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Well hello there unnamed writer if your intention was to take the reader through as many emotions with as few words as you could you succeeded. I went from curious to annoyed to entertained in such a short span. good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Haha. Thank you for the great review, 13th. I'm glad you liked this ridiculous piece.
