What Matters
In my life...9 total reviews
Comment from Paul McFarland
A nice look into your life. It looks like the most important part of your life started when you got marries. You also give a very important piece of advice in the last stanza.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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A nice look into your life. It looks like the most important part of your life started when you got marries. You also give a very important piece of advice in the last stanza.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Getting married was amazing, but having kids is life changing. I can't imagine life without my family. Thank you for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you have 6 votes now!
Your poem was the first I read and in 4 paragraphs you explain clearly what life means to you.
There was one entry and it is as long as an Egyptian papyrus. ( eyes rolling)
Reading your words made me feel how empty my life is ..no husband , no partners ,no family , no kids .. my parents gone and now I'm alone.
One should have the opportunity to live one's life a second time around.
That said,
I had many pets and I nursed many sick stays and found forever homes for them .. that made me very happy.. but off late, I do feel a tug at the heart when I see a family.
Keep safe!
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Ciao mystery poet, you have 6 votes now!
Your poem was the first I read and in 4 paragraphs you explain clearly what life means to you.
There was one entry and it is as long as an Egyptian papyrus. ( eyes rolling)
Reading your words made me feel how empty my life is ..no husband , no partners ,no family , no kids .. my parents gone and now I'm alone.
One should have the opportunity to live one's life a second time around.
That said,
I had many pets and I nursed many sick stays and found forever homes for them .. that made me very happy.. but off late, I do feel a tug at the heart when I see a family.
Keep safe!
Comment Written 24-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your vote! You sound like a wonderful, giving person and those animals were lucky to have had your help. Have a blessed day. :)
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Congratulations on your blue ribbon win!
Cute puppy .. or is it a mini pooch?
Comment from WriterHeather
This is a lovely poem. I agree. Nothing in this life more important them family. Well done. Nice presentation. Thank you for sharing. I always enjoy your work
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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This is a lovely poem. I agree. Nothing in this life more important them family. Well done. Nice presentation. Thank you for sharing. I always enjoy your work
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this star filled review. :)
Comment from zanya
It's a poem well narrated here for the This is my Life contest reflecting on the things that matter m ost in life i.e family and all that it entails - it's so true -thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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It's a poem well narrated here for the This is my Life contest reflecting on the things that matter m ost in life i.e family and all that it entails - it's so true -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this nice review, It's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Thatguypk
I really do love the tone of this poem, because I am very much a family man, and like yourself, it's all about the children, the most valuable gifts we have. This love came through so strongly in your verse. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
PK
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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I really do love the tone of this poem, because I am very much a family man, and like yourself, it's all about the children, the most valuable gifts we have. This love came through so strongly in your verse. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
PK
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. I'm also going to be a grandma for the first time in March! Exciting! Thanks again. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the This Is My Life! writing prompt contest.
You expressed your love for your children in a clear manner.
A great story in its entirety, though brief, compelling in structure and presentation. .
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Excellent entry for the This Is My Life! writing prompt contest.
You expressed your love for your children in a clear manner.
A great story in its entirety, though brief, compelling in structure and presentation. .
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Thank you, I'm always happy to hear your thoughts on my poems. :)
Comment from Susan Newell
It is so true that the nuclear family is the bedrock of civilized society and a good life. You are very blessed to have a family to love and to love you. The creation of a new family unit is indeed a blessed event that never stops unrolling. Very nice poem.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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It is so true that the nuclear family is the bedrock of civilized society and a good life. You are very blessed to have a family to love and to love you. The creation of a new family unit is indeed a blessed event that never stops unrolling. Very nice poem.
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this nice review, you are truly an understanding person. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I so agree with your words here. We strive or our own life and independence when we are young and then we have a family of our own and everything changes, a well rhymed write with warm sentiments about family here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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I so agree with your words here. We strive or our own life and independence when we are young and then we have a family of our own and everything changes, a well rhymed write with warm sentiments about family here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good poem for the prompt entry. Your very clearly set forth the progression from you and your husband becoming a we (nice phrasing by the way), to cherishing your children and focusing as the top priority your family. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Good poem for the prompt entry. Your very clearly set forth the progression from you and your husband becoming a we (nice phrasing by the way), to cherishing your children and focusing as the top priority your family. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Thanks for reading my poem. :)
