Angel?
Heart of gold ...or11 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This twenty-seven-word story, Angel, has the proper word count and sends up tribute to a loving and caring woman, sharing the love and promise of God with everyone. Neat.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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This twenty-seven-word story, Angel, has the proper word count and sends up tribute to a loving and caring woman, sharing the love and promise of God with everyone. Neat.
Comment Written 29-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
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Thank you Bill. I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Wendy
Comment from jaded831
Moving, your piece to me is very spiritual, sharing compassion for other people. Showing unconditional love and hope just because it is the right thing to do. You should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Moving, your piece to me is very spiritual, sharing compassion for other people. Showing unconditional love and hope just because it is the right thing to do. You should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for your lovely review. Appreciated.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 27 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. It's a great spiritual poem, very heartfelt.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Excellent entry for the 27 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. It's a great spiritual poem, very heartfelt.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Gypsy.
Comment from Irish Rain
I find this to be just so beautiful.
I don't know if this contest has ended yet,
but I wish you the best of luck.
'She introduced all to her Father.'
No greater gift.
Blessings...
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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I find this to be just so beautiful.
I don't know if this contest has ended yet,
but I wish you the best of luck.
'She introduced all to her Father.'
No greater gift.
Blessings...
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Irish Rain. A lovely review, and an honour to receive six stars. valued greatly.
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Have a lovely weekend!!
Comment from Shirley McLain
This is a beautiful poem to read. The elderly need so much love, because so many of them are left with no one or nothing. Great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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This is a beautiful poem to read. The elderly need so much love, because so many of them are left with no one or nothing. Great job. Shirley
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much Shirley. I appreciate your lovely review.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Yes. She is an angel, or a saint. I believe God places angels in our lives to ease our pain or comfort us. There have been angels in my life, and I have tried to be a blessing to others. You've written an entire story in three sentences. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Yes. She is an angel, or a saint. I believe God places angels in our lives to ease our pain or comfort us. There have been angels in my life, and I have tried to be a blessing to others. You've written an entire story in three sentences. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your lovely review and also your good wishes!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I originally thought of Mother Teresa when i was reading this but then she was an embezzler and religious zealot...
Of course, she could be an angel but not likely. maybe a good person or her Father is a cult leader and she's brainwashing folk to join the cause...
who knows?
Well written little piece
GMG
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Hi there,
I originally thought of Mother Teresa when i was reading this but then she was an embezzler and religious zealot...
Of course, she could be an angel but not likely. maybe a good person or her Father is a cult leader and she's brainwashing folk to join the cause...
who knows?
Well written little piece
GMG
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thank you for reviewing - and yes, I deliberately left it ambiguous!
Comment from LisaMay
This saintly woman sounds like Mother Theresa, leading a life of service, devotion, and testimony. Your poem reminds us there are angels in our midst who selflessly bring comfort to the weak, the lonely, and the forsaken, bringing them home to our Lord.
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This saintly woman sounds like Mother Theresa, leading a life of service, devotion, and testimony. Your poem reminds us there are angels in our midst who selflessly bring comfort to the weak, the lonely, and the forsaken, bringing them home to our Lord.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much LisaMay. Yes, I was thinking of Mother Theresa as I wrote it, but wanted to leave it a bit ambiguous (also to be fiction ...)
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On the same wavelength.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the 27 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece and the imagery is spot on;-)
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Perfect entry for the 27 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt and best of wishes in the contest my friend! The storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece and the imagery is spot on;-)
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you!
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much, Melodie, for such a positive and encouraging review! Appreciated, as are your lovely good wishes.
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;-)
Comment from Susan Newell
This is the first of these contest entries I've reviewed. I like it because you put humanity into the equation. This could describe Mother Teresa or who knows how many others that help lead people to the Father. Very nice. Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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This is the first of these contest entries I've reviewed. I like it because you put humanity into the equation. This could describe Mother Teresa or who knows how many others that help lead people to the Father. Very nice. Good luck in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 25-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2022
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Ah Susan, thank you so much! I was thinking of Mother Theresa as I wrote it, but wanted to leave it ambiguous. I appreciate so much that you got it. Thanks too for the good wishes.
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You are most welcome.
