God's Love
He walked the ground in sandaled feet.7 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I notice that loving dad left out the bit about the horrendous return ticket. That was a bit devious and makes me wonder if he'd have agreed to go.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Hi there,
I notice that loving dad left out the bit about the horrendous return ticket. That was a bit devious and makes me wonder if he'd have agreed to go.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you, giraffmang. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from lyenochka
This reads perhaps like a dialogue between Jesus and God the Father. Jesus must have suffered so much even before the cross. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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This reads perhaps like a dialogue between Jesus and God the Father. Jesus must have suffered so much even before the cross. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Helen. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 27 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. It's a great spiritual poem, very heartfelt.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Excellent entry for the 27 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest. It's a great spiritual poem, very heartfelt.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Gypsy. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a lovely poem you have written. I'm thinking only certain angels get wings, but we won't find that out till we get there. You did a great job. Shirley
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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What a lovely poem you have written. I'm thinking only certain angels get wings, but we won't find that out till we get there. You did a great job. Shirley
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Shirley. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This a good work done, as per the prompt, your work has 27 words in 3 sentences, I wish you good luck for the contest; I am sorry, I do not understand the message has flown in the work, first, who walked the ground in sandaled feet and why and what is the relation of this in the work, second, who is the speaker, is it God Son or? Third, why Son of God addresses God, and why the matter of God's grace is referred to, and why the question of wings comes in? Nothing is clear, brevity or conciseness has taken away the points of clarity; further, why the question comes about returning to heaven? Who wants to go back to heaven? God Son or? Why? Why such a question comes? Nothing is answered or clarified; again you say the last line is controversial; thank you for posting this; God's love and son of God is speaking such a question; moreover, the picture gives me a different idea about heavens, the heavens declare God's glory; why the question about returning to heaven? It is not clear; post more; again, your message is love one another, but whither you have referred to a word about the message; the message is just a mention and nothing else. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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This a good work done, as per the prompt, your work has 27 words in 3 sentences, I wish you good luck for the contest; I am sorry, I do not understand the message has flown in the work, first, who walked the ground in sandaled feet and why and what is the relation of this in the work, second, who is the speaker, is it God Son or? Third, why Son of God addresses God, and why the matter of God's grace is referred to, and why the question of wings comes in? Nothing is clear, brevity or conciseness has taken away the points of clarity; further, why the question comes about returning to heaven? Who wants to go back to heaven? God Son or? Why? Why such a question comes? Nothing is answered or clarified; again you say the last line is controversial; thank you for posting this; God's love and son of God is speaking such a question; moreover, the picture gives me a different idea about heavens, the heavens declare God's glory; why the question about returning to heaven? It is not clear; post more; again, your message is love one another, but whither you have referred to a word about the message; the message is just a mention and nothing else. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Al. I will answer you. All men who walked the earth in times of old did not have boots to keep from stumbling. They wore anything to bear the burning sand. "sandaled feet." This angel was born to (wo)man could not fly (no Wings). He spoke to God and God answered. "You shall walk the earth as 'the' Son of God." Jesus is God's love. And God shared his Love with us. Through Jesus, we did not die a final time. Thank you anyway. :)
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello unnamed Poet a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this review finds you well. Writing a story in 27 words is quite the challenge, one I won't attempt. I think you did a good job and I wish you luck in the contest. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Hello unnamed Poet a wonderful Wednesday to you. I hope this review finds you well. Writing a story in 27 words is quite the challenge, one I won't attempt. I think you did a good job and I wish you luck in the contest. Have a great day!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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13 my lucky number, I hope, you and yours are fine and doing well. It is hard, but I thought I'd give it a shot. Thank you for your wish :) now. if people vote many come true.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Exceptional poem my friend and I would love to give you a six star rating but I'm out so I will have to make those six stars, a virtual six instead! You adhered to the rules in the 27 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest and your 27 lines made sense, unlike a lot of them that do not bc of the amount of lines allowed;-)
Best of wishes in the contest my friend!
Thank you so much for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Exceptional poem my friend and I would love to give you a six star rating but I'm out so I will have to make those six stars, a virtual six instead! You adhered to the rules in the 27 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt contest and your 27 lines made sense, unlike a lot of them that do not bc of the amount of lines allowed;-)
Best of wishes in the contest my friend!
Thank you so much for sharing this well written piece with us and many blessings to you and your family this New Year;-)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Melodie. Your words are music to my heart. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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