On My Last Lap
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Comment from dmt1967
This is such a sad poem. It is very relatable as well. I have lost loved ones who have made their last journey many times. Thank you for sharing and take care of yourself.
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This is such a sad poem. It is very relatable as well. I have lost loved ones who have made their last journey many times. Thank you for sharing and take care of yourself.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' On My Last Lap ' , is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post,
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' On My Last Lap ' , is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a delight to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post,
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was beautifully written, expressing your feelings of how you are now walking alone. I had a neighbour, years ago, who reached his 100th birthday. He used to come and talk to me. He said a lot of what you have said here, he was lonely and wanted to be with his wife, who'd died thirty years earlier. Like you, his brain was still as sharp as it ever was, and his memories were amazing to listen to. When my husband died aged 46, he said he wished he could change places. I understand how you feel. That was 36 years ago. Keep up your poetry, my friend, they are enspiring, so well written with smooth rhyme and a joy to read. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
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That was beautifully written, expressing your feelings of how you are now walking alone. I had a neighbour, years ago, who reached his 100th birthday. He used to come and talk to me. He said a lot of what you have said here, he was lonely and wanted to be with his wife, who'd died thirty years earlier. Like you, his brain was still as sharp as it ever was, and his memories were amazing to listen to. When my husband died aged 46, he said he wished he could change places. I understand how you feel. That was 36 years ago. Keep up your poetry, my friend, they are enspiring, so well written with smooth rhyme and a joy to read. Warm hugs, Sandra xx
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from karenina
I have loved every poem you've posted...
This is a profound testament to a life well lived...
God's kept you here for a reason!
You are inspiring us still...
WE are thankful for YOU!
Karenina
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I have loved every poem you've posted...
This is a profound testament to a life well lived...
God's kept you here for a reason!
You are inspiring us still...
WE are thankful for YOU!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-Jan-2022
Comment from Louise Muller
I'd like to congratulate you, Jaybird, on creating something genuinely remarkable. Your poem is beautiful and stirs up so many emotions. Death is inevitable for us all, making your poem so relatable. Fantastic.
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I'd like to congratulate you, Jaybird, on creating something genuinely remarkable. Your poem is beautiful and stirs up so many emotions. Death is inevitable for us all, making your poem so relatable. Fantastic.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from Saria/Shreyamsi
Your poem have brought a 'glorious glow' in everyone's lives, please do continue writing. I have always liked hw you effortlessly rhymed your poem and simultaneously delivered a deep message. Hope to learn more from you!
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Your poem have brought a 'glorious glow' in everyone's lives, please do continue writing. I have always liked hw you effortlessly rhymed your poem and simultaneously delivered a deep message. Hope to learn more from you!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from sue133
Such a deeply felt poem, it brought tears to my eyes. But, gosh you've reached a truly magnificent age and are still writing great poems. The rhythm and rhyme are excellent and the ideas well expressed. Keep writing them!
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Such a deeply felt poem, it brought tears to my eyes. But, gosh you've reached a truly magnificent age and are still writing great poems. The rhythm and rhyme are excellent and the ideas well expressed. Keep writing them!
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from amahra
Your old friends are gone, but your new FanStory friends are alive and kicking. We've gotten to know a lot about you through your awesome poem-writing talent. And I for one, can't wait to say, Happy 100th Birthday.
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Your old friends are gone, but your new FanStory friends are alive and kicking. We've gotten to know a lot about you through your awesome poem-writing talent. And I for one, can't wait to say, Happy 100th Birthday.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Your words are heartfelt and deeply personal. Your writing has inspired, comforted, and warmed the hearts of many of your readers every time you put your pen to paper.
Time does fly. It feels like suddenly the years have gone by and I am a senior.
Best wishes and God bless you.
Mary
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Your words are heartfelt and deeply personal. Your writing has inspired, comforted, and warmed the hearts of many of your readers every time you put your pen to paper.
Time does fly. It feels like suddenly the years have gone by and I am a senior.
Best wishes and God bless you.
Mary
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme. Very moving poem. You are an amazing poet. I'm happy to have been able to get to know you and your work on fan story. Very well done.
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This is a beautifully written poem. It has a nice flow and rhyme. Very moving poem. You are an amazing poet. I'm happy to have been able to get to know you and your work on fan story. Very well done.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2022
