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Death in the Morning

A red-tailed hawk kills his prey.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Chris Davies
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Nicely done! I have a red-tailed hawk who lives nearby. I live in fear for my dog, but they are beautiful animals. You captured the moment of the squirrel's demise well. Good luck!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
    Thanks for the read and the encouraging feedback.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
    Thanks for the read and the encouraging feedback.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
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Great poem for the contest. I love the brutality and beauty of red-tailed hawks as they kite in the air and then plunge with talons out to kill a prey. Well-done!!!!!!!!!!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
    Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback.
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
    Thank you for the read and encouraging feedback.
Comment from LisaMay
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You've presented the reader with an action-packed glimpse of the hunting skills of the red-tailed hawk, in a fine unrhymed poem. Here we have nature at its most raw - you have set the scene very well in sight and sound.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2022

reply by the author on 29-Jan-2022
    Thank you for your encouraging review. Much appreciated.