Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello tempeste, great writing prompt and 5-7-9 format.
This is such a sweet story. Thank you for the video.

I especially liked:
Jackie proudly laid two eggs,
(Hooray!)

Great job Jackie and Shadow. Great job tempeste.
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022

Thank you for the kind review .. fingers crossed they become parents this year .. I can?t wait to watch them feed their off spring .

Keep safe !

reply by LateBloomer on 01-Feb-2022

How do you get to view them? Are they on the internet? M

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022

Yes they are on you tube .. see below link to copy and paste! It?s from today for you.

(It s 2.30 am where I am?.biggrin)

Now that there are eggs I think we will get more coverage .

I usually punch in :

Jackie and Shadow ,the date and month ,year and then you tube ..

Something always pops up !

Shadow loves to sit on the eggs so he will at times stoop to annoy Jackie by moving sticks that land on her .. like in this case ( biggrin)


https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6860A4T9hHE

Take care!

reply by LateBloomer on 01-Feb-2022

Thank you so much for sharing the link. I'll have to show it to my granddaughters when I see them this weekend. LateBloomer ~ Margaret

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022

Sorry, this is the direct link

Your granddaughters will help you find more this weekend.

Enjoy!

Comment from Pangalactic

Exceptional

So awesome that the eggs are doing so well! What a cool story this is, I really like your poem - a fitting tribute to this beautiful couple :)
Good luck Jackie& Shadow

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022

Ciao Trask!

Hopefully this year we get to see the hatchlings grow .. Jackie is so lucky ..Shadows loves her and loves taking care of the eggs..

Thanks for the extra shiny star ( smile)

I was wonder if you had an email I could forward post to.. I m no computer wizard so I only have one email which I don?t mind sharing with you.

No pressure though if you prefer just to keep using fanstory.

Ciao!

reply by Pangalactic on 01-Feb-2022

Hi,
I don't mind sharing my email with you

traskpbrown@gmail.com

reply by the author on 01-Feb-2022

Ciao!

Thanks Trask .

I wrote it down so if you want you can remove it now so others won't see it .

Ciao!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your made me smile here and in the bird world, Dads do their duty and this is party why I admire birds so much, there is never any discrimination between the sexes, I loved this sweet and endearing story in a poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022

They are definitely a cute couple .. hopefully this year all goes well and they become parents and we get to see them raise their hatchlings. ..

Thank you for your kind review!

Keep safe!

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Aww, I love that this 5-7-9 is actually about two 'love birds' Jackie and Shadow. The bird of their two eggs is eggcelent news. Animals, just like humans, experience the challenges of starting a family. This is a happy poem to read :-) Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022

Glad you loved the read

I hope you read the notes below and clicked on the video .. you can follower their love story too.

I have been following them for over a year !

Keep safe!

reply by PoemsOfDD on 30-Jan-2022

I sure did read the notes. Thank you for sharing their story. xo

reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022

You are welcome .. when Shadow rolled over the egg , it made my heart rock ..

Last year it snowed too .. hopefully all goes well this year.

Keep safe!

reply by PoemsOfDD on 30-Jan-2022

You keep safe too. Warm hugs. xo