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The Sunflower Farm Story

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Comment from Anne Johnston
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I love your story, very well written. I like how you wove the rules for the contest into every part of it, not mentioning certain words or circumstances. What a sweet little girl. It must be your granddaughter, as she looks like your profile picture.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
    Thank you so much for your astute review. There are getting to be more and more rules for family stories so I just had a bit of fun with this one. Yes, this one is Charlotte, my son's eldest of three girls. The story is of course fiction except we did take her to a sunflower farm.
    Wendy
reply by Anne Johnston on 30-Jan-2022
    You are welcome, Wendy
Comment from lyenochka
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The story is fiction? But Ellie-Jane is posing so nicely despite the bees! Thanks for sharing the lovely picture and the fun in your story which is also a humorous commentary on the many rules of the contest! Best wishes in it!

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
    Yes, it is fiction. We never had a conversation anything like in the story. Ellie-Jane is a different granddaughter, but this one visited a sunflower farm with us one day, so I used her photo (taken very quickly)! Thanks so much for reviewing.
    Wendy
Comment from royowen
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One can't blame the child, she must be very conscious of the bees, they are usually pretty tame, if you don't bother them, they won't bother you. But that's pretty cool, being photographed alongside those sun chasing sun flowers, beautifully written Wendy, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 30-Jan-2022
    Thanks Roy. I appreciate your kind words! I can understand as I was stung by a number of wasps last week, not at all pleasant!
    Wendy
reply by royowen on 30-Jan-2022
    I cam relate, wasps are bad news