Monsters Among Us
Unrecognizable The...8 total reviews
Comment from AliMom
Congratulations on your first-place win. I thought it was a very insightful and thought-provoking piece of writing. It also appears reflective and cathartic. It sounds as though you've met your share of monsters. I pray they will all be banished from your life and that we develop the weapons to combat them when they rear their ugly heads.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Congratulations on your first-place win. I thought it was a very insightful and thought-provoking piece of writing. It also appears reflective and cathartic. It sounds as though you've met your share of monsters. I pray they will all be banished from your life and that we develop the weapons to combat them when they rear their ugly heads.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thanks for this great review. I personally haven't been affected by someone like that, but I'm close to someone who has. I appreciate this great review. :)
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
A vert thoughtful and all too real take on the topic of monsters. The form rhyme and flow of the poem are well done and the picture a telling addition.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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A vert thoughtful and all too real take on the topic of monsters. The form rhyme and flow of the poem are well done and the picture a telling addition.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this nice review, I really appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
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:-)
Comment from Rebel Jim
You are so right!...
I don't see any faults with your write.
Your subject matter is awesome...
You've summed up what real life monsters
are probably about... They can be regular folks
that you should be able to trust... But then things go awry.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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You are so right!...
I don't see any faults with your write.
Your subject matter is awesome...
You've summed up what real life monsters
are probably about... They can be regular folks
that you should be able to trust... But then things go awry.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this wonderful 6 star review. It's very thoughtful of you. :)
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You deserve it!
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Unnamed poet a merry Monday to you, I hope this finds you well. I loved loved loved your A Monster entry poem. I can unfortunately relate all too well to this poem and I agree with every word. Great Job and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Hello Unnamed poet a merry Monday to you, I hope this finds you well. I loved loved loved your A Monster entry poem. I can unfortunately relate all too well to this poem and I agree with every word. Great Job and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review and the 6 stars. That you can relate to this, makes me think that you have gone through some bad experiences. I'm sorry if that was the case. Thanks again for reading my poem.
Comment from Susan Newell
This is an excellently composed description of those who lack humanity -- psychopaths and sociopaths. Not all turn to serial killing. They just make smaller nicks and cuts that destroy someone else, and then just walk away. They are without conscience.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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This is an excellently composed description of those who lack humanity -- psychopaths and sociopaths. Not all turn to serial killing. They just make smaller nicks and cuts that destroy someone else, and then just walk away. They are without conscience.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you for this great review and your insightful comments.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces monsters as person's in human disguise.
The work highlights them as untoward in their in their relationship with their fellow human beings
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces monsters as person's in human disguise.
The work highlights them as untoward in their in their relationship with their fellow human beings
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thats exactly right, you have a very eloquent way of putting it. Thanks for reading my poem. :)
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Thatguypk
Some good points are very well made here. It's more difficult to fight and defeat the monsters that are unseen, or in disguise. We very often see the effects of the damage they do, even before we recognize them as monsters. These monsters are, indeed, scarier than the visual monsters of horror movies. Well written.
PK
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Some good points are very well made here. It's more difficult to fight and defeat the monsters that are unseen, or in disguise. We very often see the effects of the damage they do, even before we recognize them as monsters. These monsters are, indeed, scarier than the visual monsters of horror movies. Well written.
PK
Comment Written 31-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you, your comments mean a lot to me. :)
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem for the prompt. the last stanza says it all:
Monsters are anyone who take away
all one is and might someday become.
Monsters have been here since time began,
and will be here 'til our world succumbs.
A great read and so true.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Great poem for the prompt. the last stanza says it all:
Monsters are anyone who take away
all one is and might someday become.
Monsters have been here since time began,
and will be here 'til our world succumbs.
A great read and so true.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
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Thank you, I appreciate this terrific review. I'm so glad you liked my poem. :)
