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Clearly My Office Skills...

5 total reviews 
Comment from WriterHeather
Exceptional
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Such a funny and cute entry into the contest. I hope she really is proud of being employee of the month at McDonald's because its a hard job! Probably harder then that office job she was trying for. Great rhyme and humor

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thanks so much for this wonderful review. :)
Comment from Susan Newell
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This is quite funny. I know many people have tried to bluff their way through job interviews and you have presented that with some self-aware humor. I particularly liked the last stanza.

Salting the fries at Mcdonalds, ==> McDonald's

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thanks for reading my poem and for the correction, it's always appreciated. :)
reply by Susan Newell on 31-Jan-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from T B Botts
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Well done Mystery Writer on this somewhat difficult writing prompt. I could feel for the interviewee. How terribly humiliating it would be to show up for a job that you were so totally unqualified for. I laughed at the conclusion. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for this great review, I'm glad that you liked it. :)
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
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Dear writer,
I am glad I chose to read your poem. I got a laugh from it. You are already the winner of the contest. I cannot imagine a funnier story of a job interview gone wrong. You nailed this challenge. Great job. Best wishes.
Blessings,
Darlene

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for this great review and your kind words....both are very appreciated. :)
reply by The Mom/DarleneThomson on 31-Jan-2022
    Your welcome
Comment from Luci R. Hedricks
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The humor of this is wonderful. Well done.
I wish I had any critiques or useful advice but this kind of work is not my strong place. All I know is, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 30-Jan-2022


reply by the author on 31-Jan-2022
    Thank you for reading my poem...I really appreciate it. :)