Try Again Spanky
Murphy's Law in full effect27 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
Haha. A refreshing piece of writing for sure (except for the cat part) Lol. I smiled at every stanza. It was super relatable. The ending here was perfect and also relatable, not to my life of course. Thanks for bringing a smile along with this piece.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Haha. A refreshing piece of writing for sure (except for the cat part) Lol. I smiled at every stanza. It was super relatable. The ending here was perfect and also relatable, not to my life of course. Thanks for bringing a smile along with this piece.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Kayte Ray
This has a great cadence to it. The flow and rhythm make it an easy and enjoyable read. The story is cute and relatable. I think we have all had a day like this. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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This has a great cadence to it. The flow and rhythm make it an easy and enjoyable read. The story is cute and relatable. I think we have all had a day like this. Nicely written.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces an applicant trying hard to shove all obstacles aside to meet with a scheduled appointment for interview.
The work highlights his head over heels struggle to obviate all obstacles to meet up with the scheduled time of the interview only to find out that it was not yet the day for his interview.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of sarcastic and ironic anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces an applicant trying hard to shove all obstacles aside to meet with a scheduled appointment for interview.
The work highlights his head over heels struggle to obviate all obstacles to meet up with the scheduled time of the interview only to find out that it was not yet the day for his interview.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of sarcastic and ironic anecdotes.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem cracked me up with all the things that went wrong - the flat cat was collateral damage in your haste to make up time. And then you had the date wrong anyway!!
Thanks for my early morning laugh (I live in New Zealand)
correction:
Your actually not here late
(Your should be You're in this context as it is a contraction of You are)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Your poem cracked me up with all the things that went wrong - the flat cat was collateral damage in your haste to make up time. And then you had the date wrong anyway!!
Thanks for my early morning laugh (I live in New Zealand)
correction:
Your actually not here late
(Your should be You're in this context as it is a contraction of You are)
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from jenintorre
A very good humorous poem and great entry for the job interview contest. I enjoyed reading it.
Typo:- tire (tyre). Good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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A very good humorous poem and great entry for the job interview contest. I enjoyed reading it.
Typo:- tire (tyre). Good luck in the competition. Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much, Jen. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from Thatguypk
Cute, funny, and with an unexpected ending. Very clever. As I read this, I was able to imagine it as a cartoon, albeit encouraged by the great image you used as an accompaniment. Very nice work.
PK
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Cute, funny, and with an unexpected ending. Very clever. As I read this, I was able to imagine it as a cartoon, albeit encouraged by the great image you used as an accompaniment. Very nice work.
PK
Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much, PK. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Fellow Poet, a happy Tuesday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your Job Interview gone wrong entry, it was humorous. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Hello Fellow Poet, a happy Tuesday to you. I hope this finds you well. I enjoyed your Job Interview gone wrong entry, it was humorous. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2022
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Thank Very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my poem.
