One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from chocolate dryad
I can see it and feel it. Nicely done. Picturesque. Can almost breathe deep the mountain air. I think it was just perfectð???ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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I can see it and feel it. Nicely done. Picturesque. Can almost breathe deep the mountain air. I think it was just perfectð???ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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thank you
Comment from chocolate dryad
I can see it and feel it. Nicely done. Picturesque. Can almost breathe deep the mountain air. I think it was just perfectð???ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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I can see it and feel it. Nicely done. Picturesque. Can almost breathe deep the mountain air. I think it was just perfectð???ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"ð??"
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2022
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thank you
Comment from Fei Ma
Such a sweet and creative poem!
I enjoy the scenery and the writing. The writing carries people into a spiritual world where human imagination is set free like a bird flying with full wings. Wonderful to read a piece like this one.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Such a sweet and creative poem!
I enjoy the scenery and the writing. The writing carries people into a spiritual world where human imagination is set free like a bird flying with full wings. Wonderful to read a piece like this one.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2022
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Fei,
Thank you very much. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Thank you very much for the six stars!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi the beauty is in the mountains, that valley where the sun comes to rest and the place is all in blue. Lovely expressions
So much peace in the write.
Benny Beeharry
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Hi the beauty is in the mountains, that valley where the sun comes to rest and the place is all in blue. Lovely expressions
So much peace in the write.
Benny Beeharry
Comment Written 31-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, Benny, for your excellent review.
Gypsy
Comment from dragonpoet
Gypsy.
This shows how the mixture of different parts of nature make each other more beautiful and peaceful. I like that the font colors match the colors of the day opening.
Congrats on placiing second in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Gypsy.
This shows how the mixture of different parts of nature make each other more beautiful and peaceful. I like that the font colors match the colors of the day opening.
Congrats on placiing second in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 29-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Joan.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most kindly welcome, Gypsy.
Joan
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Congratulations on your win.
I truly enjoyed this writing. It gives me an image of beauty and wonder that can see without ever been to the Smokies.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Congratulations on your win.
I truly enjoyed this writing. It gives me an image of beauty and wonder that can see without ever been to the Smokies.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 28-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your congratulations and wonderful review.
Gypsy
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Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent and effective use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely haiku about those awe-inspiring mountains! Your metaphor/personification is great.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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You have made excellent and effective use of your seventeen syllables in this lovely haiku about those awe-inspiring mountains! Your metaphor/personification is great.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
You have a fine way ith wods that support your theme with greter breadth than the poetic form would suggest. Beautifull photo to illustrate the text,
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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You have a fine way ith wods that support your theme with greter breadth than the poetic form would suggest. Beautifull photo to illustrate the text,
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy
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Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest, Gypsy. This was actually so endearing because when I moved from Canada, I moved into the North Carolina area. I loved the picture and your words were perfect for those Great Smokey Mountains. Blessed Be, hugs.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Good luck wishes for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest, Gypsy. This was actually so endearing because when I moved from Canada, I moved into the North Carolina area. I loved the picture and your words were perfect for those Great Smokey Mountains. Blessed Be, hugs.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for your review and feedback, I appreciate it, Aryr. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy, Blessed be n hugs.
Comment from Sugarray77
Gypsy, hello my friend.. I really enjoyed reading your verse. It is wonderfully written and a thoroughly enjoyable poem. Please forgive me for not saying more. I had injections in each hand yesterday and find it difficult to type. Great job.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Gypsy, hello my friend.. I really enjoyed reading your verse. It is wonderfully written and a thoroughly enjoyable poem. Please forgive me for not saying more. I had injections in each hand yesterday and find it difficult to type. Great job.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Oh,no... Don't worry about reviewing, take care of yourself.
Thank you very much for your kind review, I appreciate it very much.
Gypsy hugs
