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Comment from Thatguypk
I'm guessing there is a spiritual interpretation to this simple but beautiful verse. It can't simply be about a guide dog leading a blind man, even if that does require, as with the spiritual message, a leap of faith. Clever piece.
PK
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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I'm guessing there is a spiritual interpretation to this simple but beautiful verse. It can't simply be about a guide dog leading a blind man, even if that does require, as with the spiritual message, a leap of faith. Clever piece.
PK
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you PK for your review, and for reflecting on my piece. Your interpretation is valid, and I appreciate your thoughts and words.
Comment from pome lover
well, as a blind person, I'm sure he trusts his dog, though I truly can't imagine that he has a rich and full life, UNLESS he's referring to trusting in God and he says, "Lead me on..."
That is my interpretation.
Very nice contest entry.
Katharine
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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well, as a blind person, I'm sure he trusts his dog, though I truly can't imagine that he has a rich and full life, UNLESS he's referring to trusting in God and he says, "Lead me on..."
That is my interpretation.
Very nice contest entry.
Katharine
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much, Katharine, for a super review, and for your thoughtful and valid second interpretation. Appreciated!
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you're most welcome.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I can see where there are two meanings.
-The literal one is about the value of a seeing eye dog.
-Figuratively, it sounds like person A is willing
to follow person B in order to have a better life.
-It could be richer because of money, or just
because that person has led a good life
and person A needs that in their life.
-Thanks for offering something to think about.
-Good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I can see where there are two meanings.
-The literal one is about the value of a seeing eye dog.
-Figuratively, it sounds like person A is willing
to follow person B in order to have a better life.
-It could be richer because of money, or just
because that person has led a good life
and person A needs that in their life.
-Thanks for offering something to think about.
-Good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you for a super review, Pam, and for your good wishes. I hadn't actually thought of that but it is a very valid interpretation, so thank you!
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You are very welcome. I took you at your word that you were interested in interpretations. Did you have others in mind?
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I was thinking of a spiritual application, maybe to following God's plan for one's life, even when we can't see what lies ahead, just trusting Him to guide us step by step.
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That is a good one, too. Thanks for sharing it.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Maybe you are talking about a blind person who may follow the dog that may lead on the blind master of the pet dog; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Maybe you are talking about a blind person who may follow the dog that may lead on the blind master of the pet dog; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for reviewing.
Wendy
