In This Changed World
Put out the flames...4 total reviews
Comment from MJK
Poignant commentary on our current reality. We have lost common respect, tolerance, and the ability to calmly discuss our grievances and differences.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
Poignant commentary on our current reality. We have lost common respect, tolerance, and the ability to calmly discuss our grievances and differences.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Yes, you completely understand. I hope that we can turn things around soon. Thank you for reading my poem.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a powerful entry. It brings out the fact that it seems everyone in the world is running on anger and out of control. I pray that it stops soon before it's too late. Every civilization back through history has destroyed itself. Are we next? Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
This is a powerful entry. It brings out the fact that it seems everyone in the world is running on anger and out of control. I pray that it stops soon before it's too late. Every civilization back through history has destroyed itself. Are we next? Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this great review. I certainly hope we can solve our differences before we also destroy ourselves. Thanks again. :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a very well put together poem with a good message. We have to control our anger before our souls burn to ashes (lol). Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
This was a very well put together poem with a good message. We have to control our anger before our souls burn to ashes (lol). Excellent imagery, visuals and presentation.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this great review, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from prettybluebirds
It is an angry world that we live in today and you do a great job of expressing that fact in this short poem. The artwork is perfect for the writing and adds much to the meaning. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
It is an angry world that we live in today and you do a great job of expressing that fact in this short poem. The artwork is perfect for the writing and adds much to the meaning. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this insightful review, I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)