Conquered
a 5-7-5 poem9 total reviews
Comment from Nottoway
A very accurate account of the total destructive/conquering power of fire. Whether a building or the expanse of nature, it takes such a toll on everything.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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A very accurate account of the total destructive/conquering power of fire. Whether a building or the expanse of nature, it takes such a toll on everything.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
When there are fires out West, the flames and smoke tower over the buildings into the sky. It rises into the atmosphere until it reaches the clouds and the moon in the sky.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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When there are fires out West, the flames and smoke tower over the buildings into the sky. It rises into the atmosphere until it reaches the clouds and the moon in the sky.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 fire writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice imagery and presentation.
I love the moon theme.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 fire writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Nice imagery and presentation.
I love the moon theme.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you Gypsy!
Comment from Patty Palmer
Your poem fits the guidelines of the prompt for 5-7-5 prompt using the subject fire. It is written correctly as far as I can see. I like the picture because it enhances your poem greatly. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Your poem fits the guidelines of the prompt for 5-7-5 prompt using the subject fire. It is written correctly as far as I can see. I like the picture because it enhances your poem greatly. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thank you. Patty!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-You also tell a good story in a few words.
-A good closing line.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-You also tell a good story in a few words.
-A good closing line.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, Pam.
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You are welcome.
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Sugarray!
This is an amazing pic .. and a great image to write about.
The moon is so big and it looks like it s about to be devoured by the flames.
Is this an entry for the 5-7-5 fire contest.. it definitely would be a cool entry.
I wanted to enter but I forgot to book ( biggrin)
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Ciao Sugarray!
This is an amazing pic .. and a great image to write about.
The moon is so big and it looks like it s about to be devoured by the flames.
Is this an entry for the 5-7-5 fire contest.. it definitely would be a cool entry.
I wanted to enter but I forgot to book ( biggrin)
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Hi Franca.. we aren't supposed to tell people its or a contest... so I wont tell you ;). Thank you for the amazing review. Glad you liked it.
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Sorry .. I was checking your portfolio .. I will keep an eye out when the contest hits the booth and see for myself.
Climate change has hit us hard : fires , floods , cyclones .. not to mention also earthquakes and volcanoes erupting ..
When I wake up in the morning, I?m scared what new disaster I ll hear on the news
Where have those carefree days gone??
Keep safe!
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You have three votes now , I wish you well in the contest.
Hope you have a peaceful weekend!
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Hugs!
Comment from Earl Corp
One drawback to 5-7-5 poems is they don't always give you enough syllables to explain everything. After reading this I wondered where the fire was. I could have took it a couple of ways such as the poet is in Hell. Or it could have been at an innocent bonfire. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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One drawback to 5-7-5 poems is they don't always give you enough syllables to explain everything. After reading this I wondered where the fire was. I could have took it a couple of ways such as the poet is in Hell. Or it could have been at an innocent bonfire. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much, Earl!
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem for the prompt. Creative use of the prompt-fire. It sounds like a fire has engulfed the view of the moon. I love the image of the moon "swam in a sea of smoke."
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Great poem for the prompt. Creative use of the prompt-fire. It sounds like a fire has engulfed the view of the moon. I love the image of the moon "swam in a sea of smoke."
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2022
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Thanks so much!
Comment from juliaSjames
What an apocalyptic vision, powerfully presented. Made me shudder.
Excellent poetry. This is a stand out entry, mystery author. Best of luck in the prompt.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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What an apocalyptic vision, powerfully presented. Made me shudder.
Excellent poetry. This is a stand out entry, mystery author. Best of luck in the prompt.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 02-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2022
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Thank you Julia!
