Rejected by a Smokin' Hot Babe
I hoped we were a match made in Heaven.3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Cute. Been there done that but more likely my fault than theirs. Now how do I finished saying anything more about a 5-7-5 poetry entry. That's the biggest fault of Fanstory I think.
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Cute. Been there done that but more likely my fault than theirs. Now how do I finished saying anything more about a 5-7-5 poetry entry. That's the biggest fault of Fanstory I think.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good poem for the writing prompt. The rhyming nature of the poem almost makes it seem like a really good limerick! Well done for the theme of fire! A touch of humor to it, also.
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Good poem for the writing prompt. The rhyming nature of the poem almost makes it seem like a really good limerick! Well done for the theme of fire! A touch of humor to it, also.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
Comment from RodG
I like how you have responded to this prompt by describing the fiery babe that spurned you. Yes, some women are like matches and should not be played with. Good use of rhyme.
Rod
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I like how you have responded to this prompt by describing the fiery babe that spurned you. Yes, some women are like matches and should not be played with. Good use of rhyme.
Rod
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
