Cody Moments
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Decamped "Short Postings About Astatula's Favorite Son
14 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have done an excellent job alternating the dog sometimes I find it difficult to keep it straight as to who the character is but you have done an excellent job here. This is a good example of foreshadowing: "From outside, Brad called to let Tony know he was running an errand." Good job
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
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You have done an excellent job alternating the dog sometimes I find it difficult to keep it straight as to who the character is but you have done an excellent job here. This is a good example of foreshadowing: "From outside, Brad called to let Tony know he was running an errand." Good job
Comment Written 27-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2023
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Appreciate your comments and the review.
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excellent job
Comment from royowen
That's the shot, you had me going there for awhile, of Sherrif Brock Daniels is Rusty's adoptive shadow, and Cody is your adopted namesake. I think we write v sine things from personal experience and this is yours. Beautifully written Brett, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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That's the shot, you had me going there for awhile, of Sherrif Brock Daniels is Rusty's adoptive shadow, and Cody is your adopted namesake. I think we write v sine things from personal experience and this is yours. Beautifully written Brett, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2023
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You have completely lost me on this one? Not sure what you are saying here?
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It doesn?t matter Brett,
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Will leave it at that. Most of the time your reviews are spot on. But, this one completely lost me.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Truly dialogue only - not even a tag, nothing outside of quotes!
At first I was annoyed with all of Cody's constant interruptions. Then I realized that it was all dialogue, giving readers a break from what might have been a monotonous monologue.
Good luck and best wishes.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Truly dialogue only - not even a tag, nothing outside of quotes!
At first I was annoyed with all of Cody's constant interruptions. Then I realized that it was all dialogue, giving readers a break from what might have been a monotonous monologue.
Good luck and best wishes.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
I can tell that this is going to be a dope book. For,
you have added the right and exact type of substance,
that makes the viewers and readers run to get the popcorn.
Cause they know it's going to be hot and filled with twist and
turns. Nice. Keep Writing. And stay connected
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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I can tell that this is going to be a dope book. For,
you have added the right and exact type of substance,
that makes the viewers and readers run to get the popcorn.
Cause they know it's going to be hot and filled with twist and
turns. Nice. Keep Writing. And stay connected
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's hard to writer a whole story just writing dialog, but it's almost like sitting down and being the observer of the conversation. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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It's hard to writer a whole story just writing dialog, but it's almost like sitting down and being the observer of the conversation. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Appreciate your kind support and the review.
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a well-written episode, Brett. You've told an interesting tale, using only dialogue, which seems very natural. Good luck in the contest.
Just one small typo:
"It was another balmy morning when I received the call in my office(.) Brad had seemingly evaporated with no warning."
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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This is a well-written episode, Brett. You've told an interesting tale, using only dialogue, which seems very natural. Good luck in the contest.
Just one small typo:
"It was another balmy morning when I received the call in my office(.) Brad had seemingly evaporated with no warning."
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Appreciate the review and suggestion.
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You're welcome, Brett.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I enjoyed your dialogue only story. You did an excellent job. I didn't find a single error to tell you about. It was active and held my interest until the last word. Have a good evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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I enjoyed your dialogue only story. You did an excellent job. I didn't find a single error to tell you about. It was active and held my interest until the last word. Have a good evening. Shirley
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Gloria ....
Hey you did a good here. The setting was described within the dialogue, and who was speaking was never an issue.
Just a couple of typos:
Brad had seemingly epavorated (evaporated) with no warning.
for an emergency gallbladder surgury. (surgery)
That post really put Robertson in a quandry (quandary)
name over near Fort Worth. Apparantly, (Apparently) he couldn't
Easy repairs, and I wish you luck with the voters.
Gloria
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Hey you did a good here. The setting was described within the dialogue, and who was speaking was never an issue.
Just a couple of typos:
Brad had seemingly epavorated (evaporated) with no warning.
for an emergency gallbladder surgury. (surgery)
That post really put Robertson in a quandry (quandary)
name over near Fort Worth. Apparantly, (Apparently) he couldn't
Easy repairs, and I wish you luck with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Appreciate the catches and the review.
Comment from nomi338
I have done many things of which I am not particularly proud. However, I have never given any thought to living under an assumed name in another town. I am a firm believer in facing up to ones actions whether brave or disgraceful.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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I have done many things of which I am not particularly proud. However, I have never given any thought to living under an assumed name in another town. I am a firm believer in facing up to ones actions whether brave or disgraceful.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Appreciate the review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is an story for the excellent dialogue only contest. I didn't even realize it had no tags I like that you indicated where the story took place by Cody mentioned that he wanted to change positions on the couch.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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This is an story for the excellent dialogue only contest. I didn't even realize it had no tags I like that you indicated where the story took place by Cody mentioned that he wanted to change positions on the couch.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this story. Always appreciate your reviews.
