Overwhelmed
With sadness and guilt I'm...8 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
If this is fiction or nonfiction, I don't know. But I sure hope things work out for the fellow, mother and father. Emotions can be really bad if you don't seek help; although you said there was nothing you could do.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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If this is fiction or nonfiction, I don't know. But I sure hope things work out for the fellow, mother and father. Emotions can be really bad if you don't seek help; although you said there was nothing you could do.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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It's true, my son developed schizophrenia when he was 21 years old. It's been a struggle with meds and hospitalizations ever since. As a family, we deal with it. Thank you for reading my poem.
Comment from Thatguypk
This is such a sad scenario but written beautifully. One can feel the exasperation, frustration, and possible guilt of the writer, even if guilt is misplaced. One is left feeling concerned primarily about the son, which, of course, should be the case. Poor man. Very nicely written.
PK.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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This is such a sad scenario but written beautifully. One can feel the exasperation, frustration, and possible guilt of the writer, even if guilt is misplaced. One is left feeling concerned primarily about the son, which, of course, should be the case. Poor man. Very nicely written.
PK.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words. It's a struggle every day but as a family we deal with it. I appreciate you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
It is difficult to watch your child going through mental illness that affects him so harshly. When you're scared you don't always handle things in the best ways. It's hard not to blame yourself even though you know there is nothing that you did to make this come about. Hang in there! He needs you! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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It is difficult to watch your child going through mental illness that affects him so harshly. When you're scared you don't always handle things in the best ways. It's hard not to blame yourself even though you know there is nothing that you did to make this come about. Hang in there! He needs you! Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 05-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2022
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Thank you, you are a very kind and understanding person. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem. :)
Comment from poetwatch
Your son may be having problems with the way the world is going, author. Even I have problems and a hard time overcoming them. We all look like bandits walking the streets away looking everywhere, trying to avoid that pesky virus. It's enough to drive me and many other people paranoid. Good entry for the Feelings Poetry Contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Your son may be having problems with the way the world is going, author. Even I have problems and a hard time overcoming them. We all look like bandits walking the streets away looking everywhere, trying to avoid that pesky virus. It's enough to drive me and many other people paranoid. Good entry for the Feelings Poetry Contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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You are right, I think the problems of this world and threat of covid have scared him. So perhaps that makes his schizophrenia worst. It's a definite struggle for sure. Thanks so much for reading my poem and for your insightful comments.
Comment from Heather Burroughs
I am so sorry that you and your son are dealing with mental illness. My sister is going through the same thing. Unfortunately, our country isn't the best when it comes to getting help for them. I'll be sending many thoughts, prayers and blessings your way
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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I am so sorry that you and your son are dealing with mental illness. My sister is going through the same thing. Unfortunately, our country isn't the best when it comes to getting help for them. I'll be sending many thoughts, prayers and blessings your way
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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I'm sorry your sister is going through this...and your family as well. It's a struggle but we're lucky here that mental illness is taken very seriously and he gets a lot of help. Sadly, things have gotten worse and his meds aren't working like they did. I'll pray for your sister and for you, I wish you the very best.
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I'm sorry things have gotten worse but grateful that you all get the help he needs. It's definitely hard and effects the entire family. Stay strong, you've got this.
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Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Mystery Poet a fantastic Friday to you. I hope all is well with you. Thank you for sharing your feelings poem entry, I enjoyed the rhymes. As someone who as a couple family members suffering from mental illness, I can relate. To see the change is heartbreaking and scary....thanks again for sharing that deeply personal poem. Good job and good luck!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Hello Mystery Poet a fantastic Friday to you. I hope all is well with you. Thank you for sharing your feelings poem entry, I enjoyed the rhymes. As someone who as a couple family members suffering from mental illness, I can relate. To see the change is heartbreaking and scary....thanks again for sharing that deeply personal poem. Good job and good luck!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading. It's a struggle every day with mental illness, an endless one I think. I appreciate your kind words.
Comment from Kayte Ray
I like this piece. As an individual living with Bi Polar disorder it truly speaks to me. I can relate to both sides of the emotions presented here. You have managed to put into words a very difficult situation to live with. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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I like this piece. As an individual living with Bi Polar disorder it truly speaks to me. I can relate to both sides of the emotions presented here. You have managed to put into words a very difficult situation to live with. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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It's a struggle every day, seeming endless. Who know though, what the future holds. Thanks for this thoughtful review.
Comment from T B Botts
I guess that this writing prompt is bringing out feelings that perhaps a number of people on this site have, but haven't expressed until now. Mental illness is a pox on a family. There are no winners. The person suffering with it is in prison as well as those who love them. It's hard for those who haven't dealt with it to understand what others are experiencing. I hope that by sharing these feelings you might find some relief and comfort in knowing that you aren't alone. I'll be praying for you and your son tonight, and all those who are suffering a like illness.
God bless and keep you.
Tom
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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I guess that this writing prompt is bringing out feelings that perhaps a number of people on this site have, but haven't expressed until now. Mental illness is a pox on a family. There are no winners. The person suffering with it is in prison as well as those who love them. It's hard for those who haven't dealt with it to understand what others are experiencing. I hope that by sharing these feelings you might find some relief and comfort in knowing that you aren't alone. I'll be praying for you and your son tonight, and all those who are suffering a like illness.
God bless and keep you.
Tom
Comment Written 04-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind words. It means a lot to me.
